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by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 04, 2014 1:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 9/04)

The line about being like an animal should probably come from Akio.

Akio didnt give off as many vibes of being smitten in this chapter... Coincidence?
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 04, 2014 7:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 64442

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 09/04/14*

A bit less editing than in the previous chapters - especially the third person s is missing a few dozen times - and two or three where they don't belong. Also a few tenses: I turn to her… …and froze … My curiosity meets the glare of a pair of blank, deathly eyes that seems to tore right through my l...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 04, 2014 3:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573208

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Classroom Game)

I don't see any problem with the question itself, but I doubt Misha - and certainly not Shizune - would immediately call Miki over and tell her about it...
I always thought the story was set in a neutral path - like Manly Picnic without Manly Picnic.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Sep 03, 2014 5:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 112870

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 9/3)

Great, another Suzu with fairy-tail-narcolepsy. I blame YOU for all this, Scissorlips! :) It seems a bit strange that the club meeting would be cancelled just because Suzu is sleeping, because that can't be too unusual an occurence... Other than that a very nice chapter, especially the scenes with M...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 02, 2014 9:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.48 posted 8/1

While Hanako does grow beyond what we've seen in the VN, it's Emi who is growing closer to Hisao - a different kind of growth but one more important for a relationship.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 02, 2014 9:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
Replies: 5
Views: 2488

Re: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)

The view revealed by the paned glass would’ve been majestic, overlooking the bay near Kyoto, if the low-lying clouds hadn’t done their best in concealing it. It probably would also have helped if Kyoto wasn't an inland city :-) Not quite sure what this is about yet, but the frequent changes of pers...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Sep 01, 2014 10:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.48 posted 8/1

It has always been the case that Emi wasn't as "poplar" as the other girls - though it's not as bad as in the olden days before the full release...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 31, 2014 2:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -03/07/14

I don't think there's any functional difference for someone who is for help deciding which story to read. Whether the story is abandoned because the author explicitly said so or because they simply haven't updated in half a year is quite unimportant in the end. Sometimes an author will unexpectedly ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 31, 2014 11:36 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: How long did it take until you started your second path?
Replies: 58
Views: 19454

Re: How long did it take until you started your second path?

Yes, but if you're trying for Shizune's path, it should be an obvious choice.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 31, 2014 9:05 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: How long did it take until you started your second path?
Replies: 58
Views: 19454

Re: How long did it take until you started your second path?

Hmm... even if you go all out running, you can still get on Shizune's path, if you don't ditch her invitation to lunch afterwards.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 31, 2014 9:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573208

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Classroom Game)

Just because pregnancies can also be aborted that doesn't mean that nothing else can...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 31, 2014 12:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573208

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Classroom Game)

Well, it's a very short Miki-route, but at least it's not aborted ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 29, 2014 5:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456153

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

I just wanted to note that "official headcanon" is on about the same level of logical coherence as "virile eunuch" or "concentrated homoeopathic drug" ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 29, 2014 3:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 8/28)

Then this Mash probably shouldn't be looking for a career in First Aid training ^^° The best treatment for a concussion is "physical and cognitive rest" and sleep has been known to provide both. Of course in the case of a severe concussion (symptoms that include nausea, partial amnesia, double visio...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 28, 2014 5:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 8/28)

However, I took a nap and did not die, so I think we can rule out a concussion.
I'm not sure what that's got to do with a concussion, but naps are not usually lethal ;-)