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If she did mean "that" though, would I really reject her? I mean, I don't even really know her all that well. Plus, the only relationship I have been in was in 7th grade, and that lasted two weeks. I can't even remember that girl's name anymore, it feels like an eternity has passed since 7th grade ...

I'm currently betaing another rather large-ish project, so I can't right now.
I do suggest using google drive for the interaction with your proofreaders, though. It's more practical than sending e-mails back and forth...

"...that incident with the haiku.” Another noodle incident :-D “Does Lynda not like being outdressed or something?” Akira asked. “I believe it’s more that she’s worried she’ll be an inadequate date,” Lilly remarked after Shizune had relayed what she had said to the others. Wait... Akira asks someth...

Hope that helps make things a bit clearer. Oh it's clear alright... Just because it's understandable why she feels that way, it doesn't mean she's any more ready for being in a relationship. A partner who's prone to catastrophic thinking is a bad partner to be with... And rationally she has little ...

I'm still not sure about Shizune's motivations...
Misha's refusal to translate might have a deeper reason after all.

...and now it's not a noodle incident anymore...

I never even realized F&C's stories were supposed to be in the same continuity ^^°

Yamaku Academy isn't as densely populated as it was during the Festival, but it's still teaming with people... teeming A girl from 3-1 seems to be running first for team Yamaku. I'm guessing Miki runs second and then Emi does the final lap. So nobody did the third lap? Or did Emi run two? but Miki ...

Okay... A bit better. It is still very hard to read due to lack of punctuation and the capitalization being all over the place. An example from the beginning of the story: "...assembly when Lilly, Hanako, & I sit down together Hanako Notices Akira sitting..." Somewhere in there one sentence ends and...

I really have to stop checking the forums just before I plan on going to bed. It's four in the morning now, and I'm glad I can sleep in tomo... today. There’s only so much recycled air one can breathe before they start desiccating like they drank out of the wrong grail. She really does love her movi...

I might leave it in script format because I will just get the same complaints from people that think all Katawa Shoujo stories should be written in Script since the VN/game is. I don't know about FF.net, but on these forums I don't think there have been more than one or two people who voiced a pref...

You do know those values were randomized back in the day?

A few pointers:

- Don't use script format when writing a prose story.
- Don't use special characters (& for and) in a prose story.

I'll read your story once you've fixed those.

Even though this I've only used this bathroom a few times, I already know I will miss it. One word too many I think. I think Lilly has a point there. Relationships are built on trust, and if Hanako is not willing to trust Hisao that far, any relationship she might have with him would be kind of abu...

If he didn't say it, why is he apologizing in the next line?