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I can literally hear her roll her eyes from down the corridor.

Literally? I find that unlikely.

And yes, I always start when someone uses "canteen" as well...

This is the most realistic description of Hisao's medication I've encountered so far in KS-fiction - as far as I can judge as a non-professional. Also probably the first time someone acknowledges that Nurse is a nurse and not a doctor ;-) I'm curious to see how the swimming works out. Are you going ...

Hisao joins us again this morning for breakfast and adds to the breakfast spread we have we his donation of some spreads and toast.

Wut?

Well, I was going to say, that it would have been possible to turn Haruhiko down more gently, but after reading his reaction, I guess he deserved what he got.

You may have guessed what it was by the content of this post. The fucking *actions*. Well, rest assured that every single *action* has been pointed out during the editing process, and I think a good number of them have been removed as a consequence. I guess I'm not very good at coming up with onoma...

I'm not sure if we understand the same thing when we hear "pacing"... What I meant was that your plot progression from first meeting to first kiss was awfully fast. In this chapter the progression was at much more believable levels. As long as they aren't having sex at the end of that study lesson I...

Very enjoyable chapter again.
I think your "please" are supposed to be "pleas", though.

The version I got was five word-documents with close to 1.000 pages in Arial10.
And yes, for one particular chapter I had to post it to the forum with the preview function to be able to read it. I don't recommend this version to anyone. You can also read the forum version on a tablet, can't you?

As for the chapter: He couldn't have seriously forgotten that the study group, that he planned, was today. Pot calling the kettle black? To be fair, he didn't really insult him, he just questioned how someone could forget something that they planned just yesterday. Now, if he said, How can this idi...

You know that CYOA-style stories are frowned upon here, right? I suggest you take down that link, before it gets taken down. As for the chapter: He couldn't have seriously forgotten that the study group, that he planned, was today. Pot calling the kettle black? You also strove to touch every cliché ...

So it seems it took you just over an hour to post it all - congrats on that!

Now I wonder how long it will take until the first person has actually finished reading all of it.

Guest Poster wrote:This story contains some sexual content here and there.

It was a rather abrupt turn in the train of thought. The beginning of this Chapter had me thinking the circle would continue again. Actually for me it did not. Is that what it's trying to tell me...that I need to accept that Emi's not interested in me anymore? ... And yet, even now, I still WANT to...

Sorry, to disagree, but Hisao wasn't around to see what exactly set off the spat. He just assumed it was something inconsequential, and on that basis he accused her of stooping to the level of someone who - in his own words - is a slave-driver who is breathing down other people's necks. In my book t...

Looks like you had a quiet a match yourself.”

"quite a match"

I may not have broken doll,

"broken down"?

I want to say thank you to her. Instead I say this. Why? And I'm sure it was something trivial. A diet program, your uniform, I don't know. But it was. And things got blown out of proportion. And now, I had to tell off one of the people who actually talks to me in school, who accepts me. Woah, real...

Nice chapter, though I agree the pacing is rather high... There are a few places where you slipped into past tense, and also your use of the possessive "s" is a bit sloppy. About the bathing scene - usually in Japan you'd do all the showering and washing of hair before soaking in the tub. Since most...