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That's not really plausible, since Hisao didn't seem to know Yuuko when he arrived at Yamaku. Even if he never met her in person, the name of a friend's sibling should have rung a bell.

He held a torch in his hand A torch? Really? I thought technology would have outgrown that by now :lol: He realized that there was enough natural light in the room, so he put his torch away. That's probably for the better - a lot of stuff in there is flammable ;-) I originally intended it to be a c...

A friend of Hanako, whose in Class 3-3 "who's" or "who is" But the way to 3-3 is a complex maze. I’ve already forgotten which turns to take. It's actually the room next door... since we’re earlier than usual.” You said he did this at different times each day... I thought it took a bit too long for ...

You're in luck, there's a new Time travel fic freshly out. Other than that there's only Numbered Days which I already linked to in the other thread. If you are looking for a specific pairing, this is something you can search for in the library . As for the publication date... I'm not sure why that s...

Huh, interesting. I think you did a good job holding back information just long enough to leave me guessing and "ah" a few times. Am also thinking about this for quite while now, which is a nice accomplishment with such a short...well short. I think you held back too much information until after th...

Well, I never read Slaughterhouse five, never heard of Jennifer Government and never knew The Last Unicorn was also a book...

JG sounds like it would be pretty hard for me to suspend my disbelief while reading it...

Yes, that thing with the paragraphs was discussed, but ultimately it would probably have taken a few more months to rework the entire text, so it was only changed in a few more ambiguous instances.

In other news, I can't wait to read your reactions to some later chapters...

Nce chapter again.

A few typos here and there, but I chalk that up to that insane release schedule of yours...

Oh my, I seem to have started quite the discussion.
I was just surprised, because around here nobody will even ask you how you want your burger, just the same as nobody will ask you if you want your chicken well done or rare...

That woulda been off-screen, as I haven't yet written anything involving Soon-hee's time at Yamaku (not counting the first half of Chapter One.)

I think griffon's comment was about the grammar...

and you’re gonna make me where cement sandals at the bottom of the ocean.”

This took me a few seconds to figure out, but I think you meant "wear"

Her laughter turned into a harsh cough,

Lung cancer. Early stages. Calling it now.

“Medium for me,” Akira stated.

You can have burgers in medium?

Was that not the interpreted meaning of the sentence? Hm. I might revise it and make that clearer then, since that was Hisao's point. I was almost certain that was your intention. I just wasn't sure all the readers are familiar with the term "Todai" The original draft ended the morning after, with ...

My impression of the prologue: MC named the same as the poster - check. American youth going to a school in Japan for flimsy reasons - check. Conclusion: Another self-insert Mary Sue story. After that it doesn't get much better. The beginning is basically an amalgamation of scenes from the VN - all ...

“Nothing much. Thought I’d come up and see how our esteemed department head is fairing,” I say, closing the door behind me. He's probably faring, since he's neither fair-haired nor does he believe in fairies ;-) “Not that I’d know anything about those, wouldn’t I?” Tricky, but I think this should e...

Okay, now that some reactions are starting to trickle in... Seriously? Not only one but several people are already done reading this monster? Ahem... Where was I? Oh yes... When GP asked me a few weeks ago to proofread his story his exact words were "I feel obliged to mention in advance that my stor...