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Neither Golenia nor Norman are Japanese names. You didn't include any reason why they should live in a Japanese orphanage.

As such, all the children there were considered undesirable by their parents.

I'm not sure this is a legitimate reason to put them in an orphanage...

Well, you tried to include most of the main KS-girls in this scene (adding Hanako would have been too much), but I'm kind of wondering whether Mina has any friends of her own. So far we haven't seen her in the company of anyone else...

How long has it been? Six, maybe seven months? I lost count. Probably around four. He arrives at Yamaku in the beginning of June. It's not quite clear when the heart attack was, but I assume end of January, beginning of February. Well, maybe just ‘psychopath’. Why psychopath? Kenji may have all kin...

Very nice story. I enjoyed it, but it seemed a bit less polished usual. There are a lot of minor grammar mistakes that are normally absent from your writing. Also, since the party consists of two presidents and two vice-presidents your constant use of titles instead of names can become confusing at ...

Lilly's appearance in Shizune's route was a continuity error.
Both Lilly and Akira are suposed to have left in all routes but Lilly's.

I put my hands on my hips, shining my pearly whites at her...

Very nice story, but even in a one such as this you managed to insert a part that makes me wish for brain bleach

Too bad she didn't get to make any snow angels after all...

I don’t care much for the upcoming winter. Upcoming winter? In June? The oak grew and grew in my sight, almost consuming my entire vision. Behind the tree, the night sky was radiant. Little dots of white light scattered across a sea of darkness, illuminating the clearing. Bit of past tense crept in...

That's probably a good idea. The way the story was heading at the moment I was worried it would be "just" an alternative Hanako-route appended to the Manly Picknick. the last chapter hardly referenced the fall anymore - it might still have been a good story, but that was the thing that set this stor...

Interesting combination of characters, though that meeting would be hard canonically, since by the time Rin starts painting at Sae's Akira has already left for Scotland. There are two or three lines where your Rin is a bit too...normal. She's asking about stuff Rin wouldn't usually be interested in ...

"I'm in class 3-1, our teacher announced that you'd probably be joining either our class or 3-2 a few weeks ago." As class 3-1 is for deaf students and class 3-2 is for those with impaired vision (Lilly, Kenji), that's rather unlikely. 3-4 would be a viable alternative. It's the class Emi and Rin a...

This has been asked before, and you'll find the answer in the comments beneath the article you linked.
Yes, they are aware of it by now, and no, it has not been sanctioned.

"So... Do either of you know of any book-stores that might be open on a Sunday?" That would be "any book-store" in Japan. Shops don't usually close there on Sundays. Even with Lilly and I attempting... "Lilly and me" despite feeling as though me and Lilly have more or less danced around the topic "...

Nodding again, I suppressed a shudder; I had seen enough horror movies to know that if I were bitten, I really would want to blow my brains out, or, in this case, slit my throat with a kitchen knife. Since those zombies were created by magic instead of some kind of unlikely disease, I would take my...

It's a story that is almost entirely build-up for a resolution that it fails to deliver.

So I take it those three stories are supposed to be part of the same narrative?
So far the overlap has been negligible...