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You did clarify it was a Saturday.
Still Mutou asked him to retake the test after school and he never went - whether "after school" meant "after lunch" or "after afternoon lessons" does not really matter.

Very good chapter. Pacing is a bit slow but not too much so. Hisao sure runs a lot in this chapter considering he almost died in the previous one^^° You do seem aware of that as you have other characters call him out for it. I'm not quite sure why you have him do it, though. Same with Haruhiko. You ...

There hasn't been an official number of students at Yamaku, but there are some estimates.
A plausible upper limit would probably be around 300 - nowhere near the 1.700 you mentioned in this chapter.

Well, you definitely cranked up the drama to eleven for this chapter.
I think you overdid it a little though - having a potentially life-threatening accident directly after a fight is a bit very cliché...

Das kommt auf deine Definition von "aktiv" an^^°
Sagen wir mal zwei...

In 2007 - and going strong for the forseeable future - Scotland still is a part of Britain.
Saying Lilly is not British is like telling a Japanese he's not from Asia^^°

It's not too predictable a story.

Really? I thought it was pretty obvious where the story is going. There have been several hints in the last few chapters that I thought were even a bit too obvious...

I agree this was a very nice chapter.

As to Mina's condition, I have a few theories based on the hints you've given, but nothing definitive yet...
The revelation shouldn't be too far off, though.

"Cute" is not the word I'd use. Little girls and Teddy Bears are "cute."
"Stunning", maybe?

Two points about Japanese culture: 1. Hisao would never enter Mina's room with his shoes still on - especially on a rainy day like this. Usually you take them off at the house entrance. Not sure about a dorm, but definitely before entering the room. 2. No tipping in Japan. As much as I wouldn't cons...

How does he look like anyone in KS?

Just found a very impressive article about an artist who paints life-like portraits despite not being able to recognize faces.
Oh, and he's also mostly paralyzed from the chest down...
Doing things you can't do because you can?

Well, I can't comment on your execution of writing a story in third person narrative - since you deleted it before I had the chance to read it - but the decision of what voice to use is ultimately up to the author and what they are most comfortable with. That said there are some kinds of stories tha...

Anyway, we'll meet you at the front gate in a couple hours!" Hisao really IS a mind-reader if that is enough for him ;-) "It must get expensive doing it that often," I say, and Rin just shrugs. I wonder what kind of family she might have if expenses like that don't bother her. I was surprised to se...

Patience, dear reader. If I made the first chapter an explanation by the chorus, I'd simply stop writing. If you intend to do that, everything's fine. It's just that I've read so many (bad) fics where authors had their OCs fly in from America (or wherever) that warning lights start flashing in my h...