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by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 08, 2014 8:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 67987

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Complete

I think you can watch it for free on crunchyroll - not sure if the first season is still on, though. I agree it's hilarious - especially the food fight at the beginning of season 2 and the following exchange: Oobleck "As a huntsman I've had my fair share of tussles." Ruby "Like the mushroom?" Blake ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 07, 2014 12:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.54 posted 11/

Unless you're just referring to the kind of bratty way she deals with her depression. Probably that. Speaking as a polyamorous person (not that even acting monoamorous is really working out for me right now, if you know what I mean,) I would say that, yes, that is kind of old-fashioned. When two pe...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 07, 2014 7:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.54 posted 11/

but it also serves as a reminder for me as a writer not to let my own protagonist’s perspective become so skewed that the reader disassociates from her. Interesting you should say that, because your Iwanako came closer to doing that for me than Hanako in this story ever did. Then again I've always ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 06, 2014 9:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Vision
Replies: 68
Views: 28773

Re: Vision

I've been lucky enough not to have to visit a hospital during my stay in Japan, but one thing I'm sure they don't have is a smoking area. :mrgreen:
They make smokers stay in little glass boxes at motorway rest-stops.

Not much more to say about the current chapter...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 05, 2014 12:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482617

Re: Ask!

Kon22 wrote:Well, I have mixed feelings against that footjob. I mean, it would have been certainly good. ...
Let me quote Aura for you:
Aura wrote:it was more an exercise in trying to write an unsexy sex scene
I have faith in Aura's abilities as an author: If he tried to write something bad I'm sure it was bad.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 05, 2014 9:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 215
Views: 95110

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Dec 4th)

Well, it's perfectly possible that painkillers don't help her enough to get to sleep or that she doesn't want to take them before the track meet because of side-effects... or because they might be on some doping list - always a possibility with such medication. Almost every explanation would be bett...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 04, 2014 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 215
Views: 95110

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Dec 4th)

To clarify, the nurse is aware that Miki has in the past suffered from phantom pains, but she keeps the frequency and fashion in which she gets them now a secret because she believes she has it under control. Regarding relief, I suppose I should've moved this further up, but Miki attempted multiple...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 04, 2014 12:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 215
Views: 95110

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Dec 4th)

Not even the nurse knows the kind of late-night episodes I go through Kind of stupid not to tell him - he might prescribe painkillers. Besides, considering that the vast majority of amputees experience phantom limb pain to some degree it's not really a secret worth keeping... Other than not being f...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Dec 02, 2014 7:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 84926

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Bradycardia wrote:And now is the time in which I get really disappointed with myself for not thinking about trying that before...
If you're wondering about other names, let me point you to this post.

For general pronunciation questions look here.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Dec 02, 2014 6:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 84926

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Mohn_Jadden wrote:Heh, trust me, neither of us know how to pronounce the name. 'Ay-Oh-Ee'? 'Eyy-Oy'? 'Ah-Oh-Ee'? None of them sound 'right'.
At first I thought you meant you don't know how to pronounce the condition... ^^°
The last one is close: Click on the Loudspeaker-symbol ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 29, 2014 2:09 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: KS Voice Acting? Narrations?
Replies: 55
Views: 27220

Re: KS Voice Acting? Narrations?

Well, maybe Fan Works or discussions, but you won't find anything about dubing in the forum dedicated to written stories.

Please keep in mind that it's fine if you do this for yourself, but if you plan to publish the results in any way you should get permission from 4LS.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 29, 2014 2:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 34346

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]

The problem with that is that her sisters have already been depicted as unusually mature, so it would be quite strange if they suddenly started childishly teasing her sister for having a boyfriend.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 28, 2014 3:58 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: KS Voice Acting? Narrations?
Replies: 55
Views: 27220

Re: KS Voice Acting? Narrations?

Fortport wrote:I did a snappy-brief search through fan fiction for "voice acting."
I'm not sure why you would look in the fanfiction section of all places...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 28, 2014 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 34346

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]

Well, that discussion went a lot better than it had any right to, considering how it started :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 27, 2014 2:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: By Sword and Cane
Replies: 48
Views: 18218

Re: By Sword and Cane

To be honest, I'm still having a bit of trouble following your story. This has several reasons: I already mentioned the unfamiliar setting, but there is also the fact that you have five protagonists and are switching perspectives constantly so we can't get familiar with one. I'll probably have to re...