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I agree with AntonSlavik - both in that he seems to be an interesting character and that there's not much more to say about the story yet.

Isamu raised a few Gary Stu-Flags with me, so you might want to be careful not to stray too far that way...

Well, you're off to a good start. With Taro and Molly you chose characters who aren't used all that often and even your Suzu is refreshingly different from the way she is depicted in other stories. I enjoyed the dialogue and banter between your characters - that came out really well. Yes, the pacing...

One of these days I'll have to reread this from the beginning - Sometimes referrences to previous chapters go right past me by now^^° It's good to see you're still at this, and it still is enjoyable to read, but do you actually have a plot in mind for this, or is it going to be slice of life untill ...

I decided to settle on an old favorite of mine, Shioyaki. Shioyaki literally just means "salt-grilled". I've only ever heard it used in conjunction with the stuff that was salt-grilled, e.g shioyaki salmon or pork, but it seems it is also used by itself, so I learned something new today. Fun fact: ...

It definitely saddens me that Tomorrow’s Doom has now gone a year without an update. Along with Sisterhood, it was one of my inspirations to start this story, and even if it remains unfinished it will probably always be my favorite KS OC fic. [developments] was one of the works that inspired me to ...

I was a bit confused at first - does this story start somewhere in the middle?

Not even touching spelling and grammar in this one - I suggest finding a proofreader. As for content...Well, Miki and her grandfater are okay I guess, but the whole situation in the hospital seems quite surreal to me. The interaction and dialogue with the doctor are very short and not really what I'...

Beautiful chapter again.
Coming onto the home stretch, are you?

Don't write Scissorlips Suzu, or Mirage's Hachisame,… … Mirage's Hachisame ,… :shock: My Hachisame? Did I ever borrow her from you for one of my stories? Apart from that I agree with your notion. As for Megumeru's advice, the third (paying attention to cultural differences) is one I subscribe to wh...

Of course they are software. They are a part of a VN after all. You miss the point that they still fall under the license of 4LS. If you had read the FAQ : Q: Are you going to release [sprites, CG, music, backgrounds, etc] separately once the project is finished? A: An OST (Original Sound Track) can...

KS is "Free Software" as in "You don't have to pay for it". It is not Open Source, and the script files won't be published, since the only uses someone could have for the script files (apart from the official translations) would be violating the VN's licence, which explicitly forbids use of KS asset...

Wie gesagt, zur Zeit geht es ganz gut voran. Zwei Routen sind fertig, die anderen gut zur Hälfte.

Eine Terminprognose gebe ich dennoch nicht ab - außer "When it's done"

Wow, it's been some time, hasn't it?
But it seems the #1 fic for snarky dialogue has made a comeback with a vengeance.
Magic Words and duels in the rain - good to see you're back.

Well several of us already do "preview" other author's stories - though I usually call it editing/proofreading…