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"Up late?" I squint back at him. "It's 5:30 AM." ... I hurriedly check my watch. It's a few minutes to 6 Time is sure going very quickly at Yamaku… :-) I don't want to inflame this already sensitive position I've gotten myself in. "To be frank, I think you're starting to sound like Emi." He doesn't...

The inconsistency thing is not too major.
I did find it strange that this Hisao would be flustered by some sexual jokes by Emi, though. They have plenty of sex during the routes and there Hisao gives as good as he gets with those jokes.

“Oh, sorry Hisao. I guess I’m just kinda exhausted, that’s all…” the pink haired girl assures me, And again I wondered what the hell Misha was doing in Hisao's room. Considering this is set after Emi's route Hisao seems a bit too easily flustered in some scenes. Also he seems to alternate too much ...

Ooooh, there's someone I haven't seen around in a while.
There's been a recent shortage of werewolves, witches and aliens in the forum...

I remember Hisao going on feeling guilty about how his parents would give up their house, just so they could help Hisao. They were willing to give up their house to pay for a cure but there wasn't one. A lot of people think it's Long QT because of the symptoms, but (as I posted a few pages back) it...

Nice chapter - though for me Ayumu has a bit of a creepy vibe so far... Must be the way he talks^^°

Like brythain said. If you want the grammatical explanation: In the sentence "The rest of the class passes with Hisao and me answering..." the subject is "The rest of the class" so "Hisao and me" can only be an object - in this case the object of the preposition "with" . If you use the first person ...

Well... For one thing I'm always a bit cautious about fix-fics. They can turn out good but most don't. I'll reserve judgement on this one until a few more chapters are out. One thing that felt wrong about this chapter was the running. This is Hanako arc Hisao, and I don't think he'd feel any urge to...

The rest of class passes with Hisao and I answering the questions in tandemr of each other "Hisao and me" it’s about as eligible as Do you mean "legible"? him and Hisao had time to change "he and Hisao" Hisao’s argyle sweater and tight fitting trousers is a sight something dashing. Though honestly,...

I can assure you that it's totally real.
Looking forward to the first reactions from Japan. I hope hir will keep us updated.

Not a great fan of script-style writing either. And no, it's not just personal preference. Script style is lacking a lot of decriptive bits that add a lot of atmosphere. It's also an immersion breaker. There's a reason you call it "script style" even though technically other fanfictions are written ...

Now this migth seem like a lot of mistakes, but for an update this long it's not bad at all: I giggle, still trying to keep what little pride I have in tact. "intact" Maybe I should invite him to hang out with Nori and I? "Nori and me" I reach out, grasping the back of his sleeve. Which hand is she ...

The flashing images were a nice idea, but it really doesn't work on the forums. Apart from maybe necessitating an epillepsy warning the main difference between this and a VN is that there visual effects appear exactly timed with the event. Here they appear as soon as you scroll down so you see them ...

Well that went south quickly...
A bit too quickly if you ask me. Being stressed and/or tired is not really enough reason for this kind of reaction.

Couple of typos, nothing serious.

Not entirely sure what the purpose of the ravens was, but oh well. Yatagarasu is a mythical creature in Japanese Shinto lore. It acts as a messenger of the gods. Surprisingly there isn't an English version of the wikipedia page, so I translated the German one . (In my experience the translation is ...