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It's better than before, but it still reminds me of Minecraft^^°
Here's a link that might help you.

On Spacing: The problem just came up back again in a recent fic, and it seems we didn't cover this topic in this thread yet - or I've been using the wrong keywords... Anyway, for better readability a story posted to the forum should use paragraphs rather than simply one giant wall of text. To be mor...

I am some what curious about the way he's dressed though. "somewhat" “Hitomi Fujiko, right” Those are both given names. I trail me voice off Either "I let my voice trail off" or "My voice trails off" She felt bad about say you were boring "saying" She just keeps laying there on the floor. "lying" ....

And they still can't get their facts right...

You could always look into reading the fanfic sisterhood by guest poster. Many people (including myself) consider it to be a great continuation of hanako's good ending. If you do decide to read it, put several hours days aside to read it due to length and feels. I would link to it but the laptop is...

In Lilly's route you have Hanako actually progressively getting more social and able to socialize outside of Hisao and Lilly even if you can tell when they are in Hokkaido that she does like Hisao but she's happy that her friends are both happy. Well, Lilly's route is about Lilly. If Hanako exhibit...

There are a few instances where words are missing their final letter, but that might be just typos rather than real mistakes: ...Kenji and his plans to stop the feminist s . It would be nice to do work without being pressure d to join the Student Council “Don’t expect me to offer you lunch again, if...

Few more here.

Well, since Comrade hasn't been seen around the forums lately I doubt there will be any more updates...

When I was thinking about starting a fanfic, one of my ideas was to write a route for her, but then I saw one already existed. You can safely ignore that one - it's not even finished properly. Also, if someone else wants to continue...er...developing one of my threads, I would be very interested to...

I think one of the things that bothers me most about this fic is that it embraces the cliché that any elderly people in any era, will act like and use the idiomatic language of today's elderly... Well, yes, but what bothered me a lot more than the idioms was that the world of 2087 seems to be exact...

Yes, this is a story I aslways kind of liked - though it does not really tell a story.

It paints a picture of future Hisao, but nothing really happens except for one or two really short flashbacks.

It still manages to be entertaining, though, and that's all that should be expected.

Gajzla wrote:Either that or her and Hanako are experimenting and want to keep it super secret from the ever seeing eyes of the student council.

You know that is probably the most plausible explanation for all this

Looking from her face to the board and back again, I realize that, for the first time ever, our game has ended in a draw. Minor nitpick: It's very hard to tell the result of a game of Go just by glancing at the board except if one of the players has won by a large margin. To recognize a draw you'd ...

Ah well, we'll just have to look up your profile on Alexstrasza and see if you got any epic drops recently to know you're still alive
(650 - not bad)