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half expecting to be greet ing ed by a falling axe of a bow Considering the quality of the rest of your grammar this is probably just an editing error. He rises from the booth to embrace me in a light hug. A few years ago, I wouldn't have thought him the type, Hugs are not really common among the J...

Well, it was not bad... though I'm not sure if the last three paragraphs justify it being a KS fic...

I would imagine it’s true for most of Europe, sadly.

Well, I don't know about the French

I can only imagine the reaction if you attempted to get british school kids to sing to the flag :roll: :roll: . Or German kids for that matter :shock: The teacher would probably have to face an inquiry ^^° There was a large time gap between chapters 14 - 16, due in part to my own miscalculation and...

Ooh, he asked for her hand...
Cheesy it is

Nice chapter again!

We sing to the flag Do they do that in Japan? Standing before the principle, the principal Infuriatingly he instants he’s fine, He insists, probably? The other problem: Apostrophes - too many in some places, too few in others. So in this chapter what you forshadowed for some time finally happened -...

Oh well...

Never much cared for that one. Too preachy for my tastes and not really any reason to make it a KS story at all.

Might be why my one comment on the story back then was a bit on the sarcastic side...

Good job trying to make your character unlikeable - if that's what you were going for.

Apart from a few other mistakes there is one sentence I can't make head nor tails of:

"*Gate and a bus stop are wonderful auxiliary wings*"

Oops, I see you're English^^° Yes, I'd use "flashlight" for the electrical light source. Usually I use the British term nine times out of ten, so I assumed flashlight was the British one as well. Must be because I read so much fantasy that for me the word "torch" is irrevocably connected to another ...

He, whenever I see someone writing about a "torch" I have to forcefully remind myself that those strange Americans don't think of a burning stick of wood when they say it^^° “It’s because since it's inspection this school has been a cover for a series of top secret and, if known about controversial ...

Well, he basically translated the character bios to Spanish. The review part is only about one sentence per route and that mostly covers how "difficult" he thinks the route is as well as one adjective per route: Emi: happy Hanako: "special" Lilly: romantic Rin: funny (and for some reason the simples...

Who would've thought that there was yet another way to retell KS in about 4000 words? Excellent!

I'm sure there are plenty more ways, and I'm always glad when someone finds one of them

That does work with paperbacks... On today's large monitors - and especially in dialogue heavy scenes - the effect is that 75% of all lines are indented, and a few lines start a bit further right^^°

In effect it still looks like a wall of text without the free lines in between.

Actually that's the first time I've seen someone have this particular problem. Plenty of people have reported problems tranferring save games to another computer but the save games being simply gone... One wild guess: Are you logged in as the same user? The location of the save games is somewhere in...

I like that it's a Shards of Ire fic, because I adore Shards of Ire (ooh, I just noticed the connection to the title of the fic!), but I'm disappointed that you say this might become more than a one-shot, because that makes me think that this is going to be a BEFF and I have strong feelings about B...