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by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.59 posted 6/1

That's because in those other fics, the new husband typically isn't Nurse :). Usually they're pairing off Meiko with Some Random Guy as a way to manufacture drama Really? Cause I can't really remember any stories where Meiko got into a relationship and it WASN'T nurse... Meiko X Nurse is so heavily...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jun 04, 2015 2:39 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Fortschritt der deutschen Übersetzung; Nachfrage
Replies: 21
Views: 12707

Re: Fortschritt der deutschen Übersetzung; Nachfrage

Es gibt noch kein Datum für die Veröffentlichung, aber drei Pfade (Emi, Rin und Shizune) sind fertig übersetzt und gehen demnächst in die Playtestphase.
Hanako und Lilly machen gute Fortschritte.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jun 03, 2015 10:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 44455

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 6-3) Lost in Translation? Whuzz

I hadn't even heard of that let alone know the Japanese term for it ^^°
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jun 03, 2015 9:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 44455

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 6-3) Lost in Translation? Whuzz

Kyou can have any number of meanings depending on the kanji used, ranging from "today" over "border", "misfortune" and "mirror" to "cooperation" not sure how common using either of those for names would be. Fujibayashi Kyou (藤林杏) from Clannad uses the kanji for "apricot" Ketsuke sounds more like a g...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 02, 2015 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.59 posted 6/1

Yes, that sounds MUCH more like Emi :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 02, 2015 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed 01 June 2015)

I don't know what surprises me most: that that's been done, that that's been done multiple times, or that that's been done by legitimate posters. I... I still kinda wanna try it... For the record, only the first line of my post referred to vampires specifically; the rest was about supernatural elem...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 02, 2015 2:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.59 posted 6/1

This is Emi, herself, recognizing that right here, right now, she's doing something that, in the past, she was never able to do. I hope I've shown over the course of the story the progression that got her here -- and if you don't think I have, then that's cool -- but in this case the fact that this...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 02, 2015 2:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed 01 June 2015)

I think the last fic that included a vampire was one of the very few with the dubious honour of being shut down by SC... That said I'm not too fond of the premise (of including supernatural elements) as well, though I'm guilty of writing one myself… The main motivation back then was to see if it was...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 02, 2015 12:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.59 posted 6/1

Well, "a few chapters" is relative if they are all as long as this one :-) Excellent writing as always. Just in the scene between Emi and Meiko I felt that Emi's self-reflection was a bit too deep, too "not Emi"… And in the next scene I would not have expected her to have the patience to wait for Me...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 01, 2015 4:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 5/31!)

Don't worry, the limitation seems to be more [lines/page] than [lines/post], so as long as there are a few comments in between the chapters you'll get away with much larger posts. The only threads that broke the forum so far were those where the author posted half a dozen long chapters at once . Tha...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 01, 2015 9:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 5/31!)

I'd say at their current length your chapters are not in any danger of crashing the boards :-)

Hmm. Introducing 18 characters in a single chapter is... bold. I hope you don't expect us to remember them all by the next chapter - or we need a "classroom" picture as a mental crutch^^°
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 31, 2015 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
Replies: 118
Views: 36237

Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] Act 2 Update! 31/05

I-I'm sorry... o_o
Don't be. Nobody will ever like everything you write, and in this case it's just my personal preference which is not your fault at all.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 31, 2015 4:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 44455

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 5/20) Basically just Shizune/Ha

WALL OF TEXT, ROUND THREE, FIGHT! See? Now you're getting the hang of what a WoT is supposed to be like. However, the biggest moment is during the scene (IIRC) Morning Reverie, when Lilly gets knocked over by Kenji. She gets way more irritated than she has any real right to be for something like th...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 31, 2015 3:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
Replies: 118
Views: 36237

Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] Act 2 Update! 31/05

Somehow I missed Tuesday's update, so here is the commentary for both: Okay, so that's the standard leg. And that's... The running blade? What the hell? I don't think running blades are something every amputee gets in addition to a regular prosthetic. Besides most of them having little ambition to g...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 30, 2015 2:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 44455

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 5/20) Basically just Shizune/Ha

Did you make this on the fly or do you keep it handy for such situations? :-)

Suggestion for an addition:
Pay two red mana: Wall of Text loses Defender and gains Intimidate until end of turn.