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I agree - but don't force yourself to hammer out two chapters a day.
Take your time, and read the chapters again to fix mistakes.
Try to write two or three chapters ahead so you don't write yourself into a corner.

Looking forward to meeting Rin and Emi - in your own time!

Why should that be amazing? Computer games usually change drastically from prototype builds to the finished product. Here, have some screenshots from the early development phase of WoW . (Page is German but the screeens themselves are English.) It would have been amazing if KS had looked the same ba...

...maybe it's best you work with Ikezawa for this lesson. She's the class rep... And with that all my fears that this story could just retread worn-out paths have been proven unfounded. Nice job! Looking forward to what you did with Lilly. One nitpick: ...so I could read up on covelant bonding. "co...

He lost an eye, and now his friends, because of his actions. Uh... I didn't even interpret that as him losing his friends. Kensuke might have been angry and lashed out, but at the beginning he said he would have even helped him, if he'd come to him... You now, the more I analyze that guy, the less ...

I chose a Daria screencap for a reason. That show put a great deal of effort into making its background characters appear distinguished and unique. Several of them (like "Karen," the blonde girl in that image,) became popular with the Daria fandom without ever having a single line. Because their un...

Sorry, but I think people are just bending over backwards to apologize for this story. You should know me well enough by now to know that I don't bend over backwards to apologize any story. I might stay silent if I can't find anything nice or even constructive about it, but if I defend it, it is be...

Well, I think this was more regarding the now hypothetical case of Kyou moving out from his father's house. I turned to Kensuke. “I didn’t want to tell you because if I stayed at your house, I was afraid of what he’d do.” I looked away. “I thought I could just tough out the rest of the term, and I w...

I don't understand—like I am seriously vexed—that people are acting like the laziness of the writer was some kind of stylistic decision. Because I'm fairly certain that in this case it WAS a stylistic decision - and imo a very appropriate one. Gajzla pretty much nailed my reasoning for that: The ch...

The sad thing is I don’t believe these characters are unrealistic, horrible certainly, but not unbelievable. Yes, but as Omicronus stated that was not his intention ... I have to disagree here, being afraid of something has very little to do with the likelihood if of said something happening. He wa...

I'm not going to wast my bandwidth to click the link, but since the first thing that was officially released was the demo in 2009, this is either fan work or from that early version that was illegally leaked.
I suggest you remove the link before one of the devs does it for you.

Well... Two things that make me a little cautious about this story: 1. Replacing Hisao with an OC is not really a novel idea, but it can be done well - however it seems to be seductive to copy scenes from the original VN very closely, and I've seen you've taken some of the lines of the doctor almost...

Re: Observations Does that sound maybe a little more natural? Does that seem like a slightly more interesting and organic way to begin a story? Like, hopefully nobody thinks my writing this was pretension. Nah, not really - though to be honest it IS a bit too wordy for may tastes. There has to be s...

“That’s terrible, Hanako dear! "Dear"? Yes, Lilly talks a bit strange now and then, but that's something she never said once during her route. A long time ago, my first friends at Yamaku w h ere Natsume and Naomi. I second dewelar's misgivings about N&N having been Hanako's friends at some point. I...

“The only one who is at fault is your father,” she said sadly, “as well as my own. What does his grandfather have to do with it? :D [I have to hand it to you, Ryo,] he signed, [when you screw something up, you screw it up big time.] Hmm... I admit not asking anyone for help was quite stupid, but I ...

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