Katawa Shoujo Forums

Also, is this going to be Jun Yamazaki from Sisterhood? If so,you might want to ask Guestposter's permission to use her, since she's his OC. Crap, I thought she was cannon! :lol: I'll think of something and do some edits. I don't think you need to. GP has greenlighted the use of his OCs for other f...

That shtick would get really tired--even Steve Urkel eventually developed the Stefan Urquelle persona. (Did I just alienate you, Mirage?) Uh... No? And I'm not quite sure why you think you might have... Family Matters never ran on German TV even back when I was watching TV, so apart from the occasi...

Looking good so far.
We haven't seen much of N&N so far but the starting scene was ver Shizune

Oh, and:

"I'm Naomi." The blonde girl speaks up, offering her hand for a shake.

I see what you did there…

As I established in Taro's monologue, Akio has convinced strangers to buy alcohol for him before so it's entirely conceivable that he did so again. Uh... No. If something unlikely happens once it can be dismissed as coincidence. If it happens on a semi-regular basis - as seems the case with Akio - ...

Yeah, well, such intentional misdirects are a bit questionable in first person narration, but as**/ long as you don't overuse it... I have greater misgivings about Akio's alcoholism. Somehow he seems to be able to get access to alcohol on a semi-regular basis, and that's kinda hard without older sib...

Skipped over the H-scene - both because I'm not really interested in those and because it's becoming a bit hard to keep up with this story. Didn't like the chapter about the psychologist as much as the others. The whole thing felt kinda shoved in. He suddenly started to have nightmares visits a shri...

Too much has happened with Shizune and I

with Shizune and me.

No other noteworthy SPaG issues.

The story itself continues to intrigue. Looking forward to the next chapter.

PS. I know it's not probable that they escaped the hospital, but I still chose to write it that way And that makes it better... how? It's one thing to write a zany story from the beginning. Hoitash is the master of that genre. It's completely over the top, but you know it from the getgo. You took a...

Well, he could have done some justified chewing out in Lilly's route but he didn't.

Regarding Rin, I think his explosion there was a) entirely justified and b) neccessary to help Rin understand Hisao which is also a prerequisite for reaching the good end.

The uncomfortable heat

How is there "uncomfortable heat" in February?

I have the feeling you are writing two stories set in different times. One of you is writing a story at the end of the school year and one of you is writing a story set at Tanabata

I really don't think teacher are usually pitching club memberships like TV commercials...
At least stuck up teachers don't. I could imagine something like that from nurse.

My name is Nozomi Hoshizora-sensei You don't use honorifics like "sensei" when referring to yourself. You don't usually use honorifics in your stories, so this is a terrible place to start :-) who probably should of retired should have retired Those "official announcements" were kind of strange. If...

Sometimes I wish it were otherwise, but I know I can't enjoy a post bad end(I don't care what it's officially called, it's a bad end in my book) story. It is officially called "Lilly's Bad End". Has been since the beta. I have no idea why some people call it "neutral" just because they weren't at e...

Hmm... "misunderstanding" is one way to put it..

I agree that Leaty writes a wonderful Iwanako - but it's an Iwanako who had a heart attack and had to go to Yamaku, so it's unlikely that it's the same Iwanako that appears in KS. If I were to write a story about Iwanako it would probably be nothing like Leaty's version. Not likely to happen, but fo...