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-Mind explaining why not? I tried finding stuff about it but couldn't find much? Well in the case of a robbery you rarely put the person who was robbed on trial, do you? -Is she not? Definition of legal blindness: "legal blindness that defined by law, usually, maximal visual acuity in the better ey...

I agree you write a pretty good Rin. I'm not sure the canon version is quite as sociable with other students, but you've got some good chemistry going there. Spelling and grammar are okay except for a persistent problem with pronouns: to eat lunch with Emi and I today. with Emi and me and she had on...

Hmm... Even if this is just some distraction from your longer story it doesn't really work as a one-shot, since it basically just opens a lot of questions and answers almost none of them. A few comments: - They bought an apartment? - What is the surprise in the first scene? - What is the purpose of ...

It really is! The next chapter might have some geographical inconsistencies so if you have any suggestions to improve it, I'd appreciate it. Do they really charge to see a waterfall? Which one? Well, they don't charge you to see the waterfall (it's apparently named Kegon) per se, but to get to the ...

Ah Nikko... it really IS beautiful there - though the fares to go see the waterfall border on usury... Reganting the Song of Ice and Fire reference - does Taro read English books? Because the TV series was a long way off at that time. two lattes for Ritsu and I for Ritsu and me I liked this chapter ...

This might be a short chapter, and It might be an awful chapter, but I just threw everything at the wall to see what sticks. Tell me if you like it or not! Well, it is short, it is not quite awful, but seeing as that strategy is rarely optimal when writing it could have been worse... Regarding the ...

The first two are interesting. Hadn't noticed them before.
Of the third one, I knew of C.C.'s cameo, but I think the idea that the couple could be Molly and Takashi is quite far-fetched...
All you can tell is that it's a girl with long dark hair - plenty of those to go around in Japan.

Your spelling and grammar are not bad, mind your uses of then and than . As for the stories themselves... #1 is interesting since I haven't seen many stories set after the neutral ending - at least I assume it's her neutral ending, I'm not 100% sure... #2 is a story about a husband who gets into tro...

Well...
It was short.

I've been working on my homework and reading almost solidly for the last few days, and now it's the day after tomorrow. I suppose going with the only people I can call close friends is the best course of action. He met them on Wednesday, now it's Friday, but this sentence - as well as Naomi's inner...

I have rat-like navigational skills when it comes to halls and corridors It took me a while to process that one, but it was good :-) and don’t notice me until I gently wrap on the open door to get their attention. rap if there that low on membership they're Remind me again of her problem with scars...

Yes, that was a very cure scene at the end. Really like the story so far.
Two grammar issues:

He usually just listens while me and Nat go over stories

"Nat and I"

the table where Hisao is sat.

"is sitting"

I don't think they do lock individual classrooms at all in Japan - it's always the same students in there anyway, and since students are also responsible for cleaning (though that practice is questionable at Yamaku) they'll regularly be there after the teachers leave. In anime it's always the proble...

I think you've been laying on the drama a bit thickly here. Why is Ritsu breaking down in tears? Yes, her date was cut short, and Akio was drinking, but the former isn't the end of the world and the latter has apparently been happening several times already. Also Taro is turning more and more into a...

Got to save this post somewhere for later reference if I ever get to write that Fic that's been in my head for some time now^^° I'll make sure to think up some sufficiently unconventional pairings... Hmm. Shin could be short for Shinigami, and Mai could be for "Maido", so she's Takumi's maid , who i...