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Ritsu and I board the Shinkansen and we wave as the train departs Utsunomiya bound for Hakone. Any special reason they're both living in one of the top tourism spots in Japan? :lol: Too bad we don't get the tour this time around. It's really a beautiful place. but you’re brother’s got no sense your...

Actually I like that it is only one key feature of her personality that is changed. If everything had been changed, the character would not have been recognizable anymore, and if he'd done that with all the characters, this wouldn't be Katawa Shoujo anymore.

It doesn't take long for Shizune and I to

Shizune and me

Not recognizing a classmate after only a year? Shame on you, Hisao...

You know, I've decided I don't mind your Hanako being so OOC - I'm enjoying this story way too much.

And that video game reference was really obscure. I almost didn't find it googling.

Been a while since I wrote for this story, I've been working on my one shots a lot! Three whole days! A long time indeed... ^^° [/sarcasm] With Natsume and I sweeping our quarrels Natsume and me when the bell signifying the end of the day rings out signalling? who is now engaged with a full fledged...

we did used to be pretty close either "used to be" or "did use to be"... This way it's double past tense Don't they same time passes quicker when you're having fun? Missing a few words? I didn't think Shizune was too OOC in this one. She's always been playful, and Hisao might have mellowed her out ...

Hmm... I think if she really believed that Hisao jumped from the building because of her, she would never have found the courage to visit him... Other than that I agree.

Heh, nice to see this one going on.
Kenji X Hanako would be quite an unusual pairing. Off the top of my mind I can only remember one other story that used it... *whistles*
Alternating PoVs are also always a plus in my book. Keeps a story fresh longer.

Well, if she really wanted to forget about it, she would either not have told Hisao at all or told him not to tell her the next day. I doubt she would have expected him to lie to her - if she had, she probably wouldn't have hooked up with him. Besides, even if you're correct, he also lied about anot...

Okay, you know about the SPaG issues, so I'll just mention one: that coordinate to which prize you’ve one. won As for the story, the first part with Emi and Rin felt quite redundant and could have been summarized in a few sentences. Also, in that part you were a lot less descriptive than in the rest...

So... One question: WHEN is this story supposed to take place? Every chapter I read seems to contradict the last: Is this set directly after Hanako's good end? Because at times they seem to assume that nobody noticed they are together yet. Is it set shortly before the summer holidays? Because Lilly ...

Wow, Hisao is really fucking up royally right now. Lying to - or at least misdirecting - his girlfriend not just once but three times, two of which are pretty serious and important matters is a very fast way to destroy any trust that may have built up between them. And the way he started rationalizi...

Heh, yes nice one-shot. Reminds me a bit of one of my favourite pieces here - Constant Companion - but it's different enough to be distinct.

Nice chapter. Them being that venomous towards each other when fight and make up are so common is... well it's a lot more plausible than them fighting that hard over a boy they just met. A few more mistakes than usual this time around, e.g.: Some bodies don the school uniform "Some people are wearin...

Uh... Simply "blindness"?
It was good enough for the VN...