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by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162514

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 16/7/15]

Wow, some serious Nomiya-bashing here. While I agree he is not really empathetic towards Rin's feelings - though to be honest most people aren't - he is still a teacher and at a school like Yamaku. He would notice one of his students falling physically apart like this. The scene you described is obv...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
Replies: 55
Views: 19914

Re: The Headlines: Ch 10 [Updated 16/7/15]

Nat-something. Natsone, I know this is intentional, but "Natsone" is not a Japanese name. That's a lie, Lilly asked for me, That must have raised some eyebrows... I swear she's more addicted to the stuff than me. "...than I" Shizune despite how hard she worked me when I helped out the council. ...b...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jul 15, 2015 10:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162514

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 14/7/15]

"Here, small corridors branch off from the main hallway." "Each of these minor halls seems to have a toilet and shower, as well as four rooms." "The name plates on the rooms adjacent to mine are blank. I guess there are just two of us here." So Hisao is sharing his bathroom with only Kenji but just...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jul 15, 2015 10:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/24/15)
Replies: 47
Views: 18186

Re: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/15/15)

and this is the longest you’ve had a relationship since that Iwanako girl.” That bar's not hung very high :-) Your father heard that the cherry blossoms in Hokkaido are blooming early this year with all the warm weather this year, Would be VERY early... Hanami in Hokkaido is usually end of April/ea...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162514

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 14/7/15]

Skipped the smut, so just commenting on the last paragraph:
Sowering in the girls' dorms? Guy's got guts...
Also first he's hearing the voices in Ritsu's room, then they are standing on the corridor in front of the shower. It's possible they went outside while he dryed himself, but it's a bit strange.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jul 14, 2015 6:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Decadent Albatros' oneshots! (Kenji's event, prt. 2)
Replies: 51
Views: 16036

Re: Decadent Albatros' collection of Oneshots!

"Look, please tell me you haven't told anyone about this..." Smooth move... Admitting his guilt befroe even knowing WHAT it is she is accusing him of... For all he knows his tie could be crooked... I still can't believe it, Hanako managed to win this! We're all baffled, no one in this room thought ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 13, 2015 3:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Updated 16/07/15)
Replies: 11
Views: 4348

Re: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Formerly Word of Mouth)

I did, in fact, get a 100% on the assignment :D
Naturally. Did you submit all of it or just the prologue?
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 13, 2015 8:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162514

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 13/7/15]

You're a font of Japanese trivia, Mirage and I find it fascinating :D Whenever I watch something subbed now, I'm going to be looking for that chotto! I actually don't hear it that much in anime - the typical anime heroine (Tsundere) would rather outhright scream "Kirai!" (I hate you) than be so for...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 13, 2015 5:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162514

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 8/7/15]

Once about 6 people jumped on my budies bed once and went right though it, I can confirm that this is the sound it made. Yeah... I can attest that most beds are not made for more than four people: When I was on a class trip once, there were four guys playing cards in the bed above mine when a fifth...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 13, 2015 4:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117723

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Ambiguous" - 12/7/15 Update

Okay, it's official: I like this spin-off more than the main story now :-) They swap POV to Misha and she's going into town with Shizune. She hears a car coming, then has a whole monologue about how she could move, but it'd be better if she just stood there and died since she "ruined everything" Pre...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Jul 12, 2015 3:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
Replies: 55
Views: 19914

Re: The Headlines: Ch 8 [Updated 10/7/15]

A chapter from the PoV of an unconscious person 😅.
Interesting... We'll see how well it mirrors actual events...

One thing: feint <-> faint
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Jul 12, 2015 2:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Updated 16/07/15)
Replies: 11
Views: 4348

Re: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Formerly Word of Mouth)

I do remember this story, though I'm not sure how much - if anything - has changed or if it went much further than what you posted so far.
What I am sure of is that for any kind of school assignment this would be a straight A.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jul 10, 2015 3:15 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: German Feedback - Rückmeldungen zur deutschen Übersetzung
Replies: 76
Views: 45277

Re: German Feedback - Rückmeldungen zur deutschen Übersetzun

Die Übersetzung selbst ist fast fertig.
Danach kommt noch ein wenig Playtesting.
Ein Zieldatum gebe ich aber trotzdem noch nicht, weil immer was dazwischen kommen kann...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jul 10, 2015 3:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162514

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 9/7/15]

Lilly canonically leaves for Scotland in every path except for her own good ending.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jul 10, 2015 3:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 162173

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]

I agree. If Kagami wouldn't be in actual physical danger the line would be thinner and grayer still. Hisao's not a terrible enough guy to risk someone's physical well-being... is he? Oh well, technically she has been in danger of epilepsy for some time and only learned about it the day before, and ...