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“Oh, I see that you got a haircut,” Lilly breaks the silence. I really doubt that. :-) As for the rest... Well, obviously the story needs a lot of work on the grammar side, but I also don't think Misha would be that open about what happened to anyone nor would Lilly be so quick to offer advice on h...

Hey, Doctors are not supposed to bang their patients.
Parents of patients are free game

Call me Akane.

How very unprofessional...
Is she going to issue him a pass after he's finished with treatment?

I wouldn't be able to keep up with proofreading

In Japan it's six years of elementary school followed by three years each of middle and high school.

Very nice story so far.

It was a bit strange that Hanako left the school with Akio and was at the Shanghai with Lilly...
Is this a separate story or does it borrow from other stories?

"...what it would cost my Mum to ship me Crunchy Nut Cornflakes every month." - I can imagine they'd have these in Japan, no? Possible but not likely - especially not in a small-town conbini like the one they have to do their shpping in. You can get some international brands in Japan (Kit Kat of co...

Sharp-O wrote:I agree. I's on its own is definitely wrong but "Lilly and mine's last hurrah" sounds wrong too.

Of course it does. Because it is.
I said the correct version is "Lilly's and my"
But of course "our" works as well

Does "I shouted I's last hurrah" sound grammatically correct to you?
No? Then why should "Lilly and I's" be any more correct?
"I" is never a possessive pronoun.

The correct form would be "Lilly's and my".

Akio kept his spirits high enough to make Lilly and I’s last hurrah memorable

"I's hurrah"? Really?

“You’re boyfriend is quite the showman.”

"your"

Honestly, after the dramatic bullshit I've been writing in Monomyth, I really needed a light and fun Hanakio outing so I hope everyone enjoys it!

+1

Actually, it is also pronounced with an "n" The Japanese language doesn't even have a single consonant "m"; they probably couldn't pronounce it "sempai" even if they tried. It would probably come out something like "semupai". It's true that if you pronounce a "p"-sound after an "n" there might be a ...

“Not a Lovecraft fan,” I say, “I really don’t like that kind of genre.” I guess she wouldn't be :lol: “Tolkien, Sanderson, Jordan, Robert Frost, Thoreau when he’s not being all weird, Shakespeare, Chaucer, Reverend King, Kipling-” When did she read all that stuff? Even if she spent a couple of mont...

Yes, your Taro somehow understands Rin despite barely having interacted with her before.
That's why I like the SoL scenes in thos story much more than the dramatic ones. The drama is always way over the top, and Taro always develops enourmous social skills to be able to deal with it.

I continue my journey towards the front gate, and the person stood there. "standing there" [Because deaf people speaking sounds dumb.] Haha. Wait… Was that intentional? as we continue towards the best hot chocolate vendors. So... is she just allowed to keep the prototype? I thought this was suppose...

Well he gave them the slip on Tuesday and started in the newspaperclub on Wednesday, but I suppose Monday could have gone differently than in the VN.

Very good chapter - except for the dream scene, though I'm not a great fan of those in general so take from that what you will.
I found it a bit hard to know who was saying what in that scene, though that may have been intentional.