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You think he wanted to see if slamming the door would give him a heart attack?
Risky move if you ask me ^^°

“I didn’t, I bought a fresh one from the school store yesterday. Waitwaitwait - They sell girls' uniforms to male students? Creepy... “Y’know what? I just might. Get all Gurren Lagann on your asses!” He grins. Cutting it really close - that show was just airing at the time. :-) Throw some :twisted:...

... turn my head towards Hanako, whom is exhibiting an amused expression. Who Anyway, at least make sure to not come late to class, Hicchan! See you!~" You know they have quite a lot of classes even though finals are supposedly over. They were over since the story started, and how long has that bee...

Das offizielle Releasedatum ist weiterhin:
"When it's done."

Congratulations on your decision to do the translation yourself. It may be still rough, but it will get better if you stay at it. One thing you hardly have to worry about being one-handed in Japan is eating. Almost all meals are prepared so you can eat them with chopsticks, and you only need one han...

Mirage_GSM: Your input is highly valued by me. I apologize for replying to some of your criticism like an idiot who clearly didn't do his research, I dove into all this unknowingly and didn't take the time to make something well thought out and put together. I'm sorry if my shit writing and refusal...

Then you got lucky.
Usually Google translate yields mostly gibberish when tasked with translating Japanese.
It is helpful if you know some basic Japanese to translate individual kanji or words, but it usually badly mangles any context.

As for the grammar mistakes, you might be referring to the parts when Hisao is talking about something that happened in his immediate past? Or did I actually skip a bunch of text and write it in past tense instead of present? I'm not really sure anymore. That part is okay, but he seems to have a li...

Well, we have a lot of polish people living here and even more Polish names close to the polish border.
I wouldn't bat an eyelash if someone with that name told me they were German. Same for Turkish, Italian or Arab names, really.

Good job on the Japanese line by the way.

I still enjoy your story and your Miki - though this chapter had little Miki in it... The biggest problem continues to be grammar, especially tenses which in this chapter sometimes switch two times in a single sentence. With your current update schedule being not too fast-paced I think you could uti...

I liked Zero better than the original series, but the ending was abysmal^^°

Anyway I liked this piece. You managed to give Suzu more characterization in those few paragraphs than other writers did in 50K+ words.

Well, Eurobeatjester's fic is some steep competition, but your writing style is good and you go to the effort of doing research. You're going with a whole cast of OCs which is... ambitious, but on the other hand you're not in the danger of getting them wrong. Three things I noticed: - The name Rebec...

She stops and turns around, her expression still blank. “Away. You should too. Hisao’s head is all busy right now.” So since when has Rin been able to read people? And better than Emi at that. ^^° “But Hanako – we can’t ignore this forever.” “I know, Hisao. B-but I’m not ready to t-talk about it. N...

where me and Hanako live

"Hanako and I"

and let's say that the other sweet thing tasted amazingly.

Hmm I wonder what that other sweet thing was that has such an amazing sense of taste...
(Hint: Drop the "-ly")


Nice one-shot

I don't think Emi is OOC here - people do change with time and two years of loneliness will change anybody. The style is certainly... unique. In the beginning it feels like a summary, but as the story progresses scenes become more detailed only to go back to feeling like a summary again. I think it'...