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I like how the three characters have so completely different reactions, from Misha's panic to Shizune's mild annoyance to Iwanako's not caring at all.

Obviously I don’t want to give anything away here. All I’ll say is that there is more than one way of looking at almost everything... Please don't stoop to the "police is composed of nothing but idiots who couldn't be bothered to cut short their doughnut-break even if dead bodies start appearing ev...

“Hm. I wonder how much credence they’d give it. They’ve already dismissed your incident as little more than a traffic violation, and without your letter we haven’t got much to tell them.” Uh... One person gruesomely murdered, one of the two threatening letters and in light of those another attempte...

My opinion is that if something like this poses a serious problem in a relationship, there is something fundamentally wrong with the relationship in the first place.

Edit: wie ist es eigentlich, habt ihr ab kapitel 2 übersetzt oder seit der vollversion nochma direkt mit kapitel 1 angefangen? das würde mich echt ma interessieren :) Akt eins wurde nochmal leicht überarbeitet; ein paar Formulierungen angepasst und ein paat Tippfehler beseitigt, aber im Großen und ...

Okay the writing is mostly okay so far. You already said subsequent chapters wouldn't copy as much text from the original, do that's okay. One thing: "Excellent. Well, Miss Furukawa, I'm your homeroom teacher, and Mr. Nakai, I'm both your homeroom and science teacher." Mutou is the homeroom teacher ...

Okay, before I start, let me tell you that I am not a fan of Clannad - or more specifically not a fan off Clannad After Story. The first season is a perfectly average Key Anime with a few interesting heroines (of which Nagisa is not one). The second season is a mess of lazy writing grinding the view...

So in the beginning she was all excited about some really great scoop, and then she immediately forgot about it in favour of the sob story of some old guy nobody except Hisao and Lilly at her school know, and she's going to try to sell Naomi on printing it in the school newspaper?

Reader with a strong preferrence to have the story on-site here.
If the author can't be bothered to at least copy paste their story here, then I can't usually be bothered to read it.

Her first real scoop since she had joined the Newspaper club and it fell right into her lap.

So... What was the scoop she was thinking about in the beginning?

“But I have a problem that only Yamaku’s best news-hound can help me with!” I respond. I think that's supposed to be Molly's line. I'm having a harder time getting into Assassination Classroom(I've watched the first two episodes so far) Stay at it. It picks up once it's done with all the character ...

Oh, this is supposed to be part of that other piece you posted a while back... Why did you make a new thread? It took me until you mentioned "cluster headaches" to make the connection... Writing is very good, and the characters are interesting, though I can't help but be pulled out of the story ever...

Well, congrats on reaching the end of the main story, I guess.

I agree with Mahorfeus that the story didn't need to have this kind of heavy conflict introduced this late in, and with azumeow that Mai is a bit hard on Hisao, but other than that it was a fitting conclusion to a great story.

This is... brilliant. Loved the way, Mai was written - as well as probably everything else about it. Just can't really see the connection to Developments... Edit: Okay, now that I've read chapter 60, I see the connection. On that note you should probably add a note that this should preferably be rea...

Well, personally I don't consider girls in trousers all that unusual.
Guys in skirts, though…