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“Just… Thank your lucky stars that we’re going to be in On-Campus Suspension for rest of the week. Yes, punish the couple by giving them time to bone all week :-) “So I’m using Akio as a stand-in for my romantic desires because he’s one of my closest friends?” She furrows her brow, hopefully going ...

You know what a pain in the ass grappling rules are - especially if you've only got one hand...

Kenji is one, if not the, of the best friends I have There are several ways to make this work. I suggest this one: "Kenji is one of the best friends I have - if not the best." Today is no excuse, you probably meant "exception" and that someone looks like to be me "seems to be me" Also a few superfl...

Hmm... I didn't think ToraDora was too heavy on the drama - maybe except for the last few episodes.
It's spiritual sequel was MUCH worse^^°

Yes, those are Kata, and they don't use sharp swords.
Notice how they swing the swords very slowly and keep at least twenty cm between the blade and the bodies of their partners?

It's okay, I can suspend my disbelief enough to still enjoy the story - just don't try to think of an explanation

Ryuunosuke is the student, the opponent isn't. I don't know which is worse. Having two students hacking at each other with real swords or a teacher striking at a student's head with no backup plan in case the student doesn't manage to block. It's basically the first thing that get's pounded into yo...

Let me get this straight. They are students fighting with real katana? In front of a crowd? And they are doing strikes to the head? What is this? The hunger games? Apart from this slightly hard to swallow scenario the writing is okay. You could use sentences that are a bit less run-on - that sentenc...

Good chapter, but you consistently misspell "Lilly" - and now you've infected Sharp-O as well...

Not gonna lie, this is exactly the kind of thing I've stopped reading fanfics over. If I didn't like what you've already done so much I likely would. As it stands, I'm going to continue to give it a chance, but my patients for all this drama is wearing thin. Actually I think this attempt at drama i...

Well, the distinction between "abandoned" and "ongoing" was a bit arbitrary, but in general we considered a story that hadn't been updated in 6 months abandoned with some notable exceptions for long going stories with known long update cycles. I agree this could be improved somewhat, but rather than...

Huh. Okay, that's unintentional but awesome but no, it's because Toradora basically revolves around a bunch of dumb teens not telling each other how they feel and the melodrama that unfolds because of it. :lol: Well, I would have said because the two main characters struggle with unrequited love fo...

“I would have liked to seen the first one.”

Oh boy... I'm certain she would've
Nice chapter again!

As for giving editing privileges, I think SC is somehow able to make someone's posts magically (?) belong to someone else, so short of granting mod status to someone (which is not likely) that would be the way to go. I also said I'd be willing to take up the post if there is sufficient interest in t...

The members left one by one until only me and Suzu were left "Suzu and I" I smile as I disconnect the call only to be startled at the glaring eyes of Suzu. "startled by" “Exactly how long were you and Taro dating?” She's going to Miki with that question? Wouldn't have expected that, but good for Ta...

That house is why this one-shot exists, And here I was just going to ask how you two got the idea to write this collaboration. :-) ...exceptionally ugly house by the way^^° Well, wow. I wasn't expecting anybody to pick up on that reference. Well, it was hard. Sakura is hardly ever referred to by he...