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Never, ever play grisaia no kajitsu. Those scenes haunt me in my sleep.

Having seen the first season of the anime, I wouldn't touch that VN with a three-meter pole...

That will teach them to do mission briefings before sending out the agents... Or maybe it won't ^^° Lilly hasn't fallen out with the Hakamichi family, yet, at least. She seems to know about the multiverse as well, since she didn't freak out completely when Molly knew her first name out of nowhere. D...

It feels like there's a section missing between part one and two, but I like the direction this is taking.
A bit of mystery solving never hurt a story

make sure he doesn't lift and wallets on the way back?" any "But why do they trust his freinds?" I question, still baffled. friends the rather bored person sat behind the counter types idly. sitting I still think this US model of OCS is kinda impractical at a small school like Yamaku except if half...

“So who’s idea were these?” whose how she’s sat on me. how she sits It feels quite course coarse? but if it's lace it shouldn't feel coarse... God bless that blonde temptress. How does Akio know Akira? No comments on the H-scene as I skipped it. Very nice chapter up until that part, though :-)

Yes, the readings of the Kanji are correct, but "一" is the number 1 or the ordinal not usually the article, so I'm not sure a Japanese would make the connection. Also "太" (tai or ta) is more thick or fat*, while height uses the kanji "高" (takai)。 Apparently 高一 (read: Koichi) is also used for names, ...

Yes, very interesting... At first I thought this was going in the same direction as Fractal Butterfly - and it is a bit similar - but you gave it a twist of your own. The only thing that bugged me a bit was that he was made to believe that his signature would affect both him AND his wife, when in ac...

Two minor typos:

I get the jist

"gist"

I murmor,

"murmur"

I don't seem to get the "stud" gag - if there is one...
I'm also not quite sure the Taichi gag works in Japanese, but you don't have to care if it does

A short but entertaining chapter all said.

You know, among all the writers here on the board, if they asked me who was least likely to be a copycat, you'd be top of the list.

This piece is quite different from what you usually write. Still - or probably because of that - I really liked it.

Actually I kinda stopped reading this story around the time of my last post in this thread, which was... almost two years ago.
The reasons are pretty much the contents of said last post. I simply didn't have the slightest idea what was happening anymore.

Considering Hisao has known his mother all his life he seems pretty defenseless against her ways :-) I do hope she won't be too prominent in your cast as she already gets on my nerves... My way of thinking is that he's tried, many, many times but had no success. I wasn't suggesting that he should t...

His head wasn’t really a head any more.

So that puts paid to the idea that Hisao is the killer...

They might start calling a number of people though, to get the warning out...

As swampie said, a few grammar issues, e.g. I went from being locked up on in my own prison or denying her of becoming a better person. I suggest "preventing her from..." I belive you could catch most of them yourself by reading the stuff out loud, but a proofreader is also alwasy an option. But don...

Hmm. It seems I forgot to comment on chapter one... Rectifying that, the story is very good as expected from you. Considering Hisao has known his mother all his life he seems pretty defenseless against her ways :-) I do hope she won't be too prominent in your cast as she already gets on my nerves......

I think it's perfectly possile to be in love with someone and still not want to break into the happy relationship they're in I can attest to it :( Or, at least, it's perfectly possible to be crushing very hard on somebody and not want to break up a happy relationship. Actual love I would expect to ...