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Hisao should have his mobile virus-checked...
Calls from the same number being shown as a contact one time and not at another shouldn't be possible - just as sending two calls to the same number and reaching different recipients.

I chuckle throwing out a right hook which she ducks under it...

The "it" is already there in form of the "which". Both refer to "right hook" but it only needs to be referred to once.

Shouldn't Lilly know what Shin looks like from seeing through all the other members' eyes before?

The one problem of every superhero ever...

Can't be. She calls him Hicchan

Also, he'd probably know her number, wouldn't he?

Well, one thing you should think about if you haven't already: Yuuko is sending the teams to timelines that have been "meddled with" somehow. If that is the case, she should have some idea of what the meddling was about and what the timeline should be like without the meddling. Otherwise the team wi...

Maybe Helbereth will write the last chapter this christmas

But there's more? Uh... That's what I wanted to ask as well... I know he said that this is supposed to be the last chapter, but it gives no explanation at all for Hanako's behaviour for the rest of the story, for her reluctance to talk to Hisao about university and everything. There's a lot of buil...

One, that battle was badass. Was ascalo supposed to be a reference to something? Not in particular, I just wanted to give it something extra like I have with all the other weapons. In this case, I turned the dragon-slaying lance of legend into a pile bunker, the best weapon ever forged by man! Ah, ...

It's not so much that they cheat per se...
More like they don't wait for you to even teach them the rules in the first place

I pause practicing turning the large bag hanging in front of me’s imaginary kneecaps to broken shards and grab a towel and some water. I think there's a word or two or five missing here. Nice chapter as always. I did a bit of Judo when I was a kid, but there seems to be a whole different set of ter...

Small cultural hint: You don't tip in Japan. Ever. That's just a minor point, though. What made my jaw drop to almost-floor level was Hisao going full disclosure on his and Hanako's sex-life to Lilly the first chance he got - after she explicitly told him that Hanako did NOT see fit to tell her. And...

Hmm... suddenly she's peculiar about training
That wasn't an issue when she sent the others on their first mission...

Also: strangely it is called "derring-do". No idea why.

Of those I've only seen Durarara and there not the English Dub, and from the Japanese Dub I can't even remember what Erika's voice sonds like. (Personality-wise I think she's about as far from Hanako as Lilly is from Celty...) I have to say, though that Miyuki Sawashiro does the best dub for a mute ...

Hmm... I was a bit disappointed that we didn't get to know about the conclusion of Hisao's and Ayumu's "date" :-) Ensemble cast seems to be "in" these days - just make sure you don't splinter the story too many ways. Oh, and Hideaki is a given name, and they are probably not on first name basis with...

Just like how our powers compliment each other, so do our outlooks. complement - or maybe their powers are just exceptionally polite... I, too, vote for some way to more clearly identify the pov character for each chapter. The way it's now you have to eliminate every possibility as they are mention...