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by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 19, 2015 9:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - [Concluded!]
Replies: 78
Views: 22121

Re: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - 19/10/15

She is paralysed from the waist down so she does meet the criteria for enrollment...
Wait, if she actually IS disabled how does BIID even figure into this?
It's basically that she's paralyzed, but she's not unhappy about it - that is true for a lot of students.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 19, 2015 9:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 47082

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 18/10/15)

I have the feeling we'll meet the final player in this play soon...

Anyway, very nice mature Rin portrayal. I know it's quite hard to capture RIn as she is in the VN and it's even harder to interpolate that into the future, but you did a great job with it.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Oct 18, 2015 12:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 24774

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 3: Familiar Ground - 2015-10-1

That, of course, depends on the author. This chapter is quite short by the standards of the more prolific writers here on the forum.Also half of it is a dream where nothing really happens by definition, and the remeining four or five paragraphs are your charakter deciding to go to Yamaku - not reall...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 17, 2015 9:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Over what time frame should I play the game?
Replies: 8
Views: 5324

Re: Over what time frame should I play the game?

Well, I read it all in one go, but I was under a time constraint, since I was a beta-tester, and the release date was coming up, so my experience is probably not representative. I also don't recommend to imitate it. :lol:
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 17, 2015 8:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - [Concluded!]
Replies: 78
Views: 22121

Re: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - 17/10/15

The first image on the wiki after the chibi character portraits is Satako crucified and bleeding, so that's cheery :lol: Well... Let's just say I don't recommend watching the show if you get nightmares easily. And don't be fooledby the first few episodes being cheery slice of life... Good chapter, ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 16, 2015 6:09 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Over what time frame should I play the game?
Replies: 8
Views: 5324

Re: Over what time frame should I play the game?

That's yomething you have to decide for yourself. Noone here can know which way you would enjoy it more.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 16, 2015 6:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 24774

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 3: Familiar Ground - 2015-10-1

I close my eyes and take a deep breathe breath something starts to materialise s There are three or four other cases of missing or additional 'S' at the ends of words - both plural and 3rd person singular. I thank my blessings "thank my blessings"? On c e he has sat down, Also a few missing commas,...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 16, 2015 2:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/15)

I'm really happy none of you saw that coming... To be honest, I already expected it to happen on his first timed try - when I read that he wasn't actually looking where he was swimming, I knew that wouldn't end well. When he tried again after taking off his shirt, the line before the accident ("I m...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Oct 15, 2015 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/15)

This continues to be my favourite Saki Story on the forums.
Thanks for having him hit his head instead of the ubiquitious heart attack :-)

Also, nice picture!
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 10, 2015 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
Replies: 83
Views: 32799

Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story (Updated 10/09)

Also the Christmas Special, since I finished the New Year’s Special days ago. And three or or four novellas, but I’ve stopped counting those by now.
I was going to comment on how you manage to keep TWO stories updating regularly at the same time, but now I'm not sure why I should even bother...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 10, 2015 8:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

Hmm... About the only things I've seen from Utena were a few AMVs and the movie... Can't say the movie motivated me much to see more. I had no idea what was happening the whole time, and the time when all characters suddenly transformed into race cars ranks among my "TOP 3 WTF Anime Moments" - and t...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 10, 2015 8:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Third Star - A Misha epilogue
Replies: 22
Views: 8451

Re: The Third Star - A Misha epilogue

I'm so relieved that you like Mean Girls' Molly!
Hey, I posit she was only this mean, because she wanted to outdo Shizune in that department, so that she'd be more appealing to Misha's masochistic streak. :mrgreen:
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 10, 2015 1:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Third Star - A Misha epilogue
Replies: 22
Views: 8451

Re: The Third Star - A Misha epilogue

Rule of thumb - Leave out the "Shicchan and" and see if it still makes sense.

Which sound correct to you?

"I briefly consider buying funny masks for [] I to wear"
or
"I briefly consider buying funny masks for [] me to wear"
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 09, 2015 4:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Third Star - A Misha epilogue
Replies: 22
Views: 8451

Re: The Third Star - A Misha epilogue

I briefly consider buying funny masks for Shicchan and I to wear
for Shicchan and ME
And also, it's a Misha-and-Shizune,
Maybe...
I don't think Molly is completely over Misha yet either. Can't say I disagree much with her regarding Shizune, but that's no reason to let it out on poor Misha.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 09, 2015 3:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 100075

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Stay tuned, more is on the way!
Looking forward to you posting the next chapter - going to have a few comments on that one :-)