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by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 26, 2015 5:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bantamweights: A One-Shot
Replies: 43
Views: 17896

Re: Bantamweights: A One-Shot

So... I've been discussing this with a few people via PM, It also bears mentioning that I wrote a story here that was positively dripping with homoromantic subtext and literally nobody caught on without my walking them through it. Well, since Leaty brought it up in the MTtB-thread, I'll explain. Le...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 26, 2015 5:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

Remind me again: how many sex scenes did 4LS include in Act One of KS? My memory isn't fantastic but I'm pretty sure it was a number between one and negative-one. Yes. And it was an integer. So imagine how diminishing it would feel to me if somebody pointed to myself and this other girl and said "L...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 26, 2015 5:45 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Just finished my first playthrough, this one was emi
Replies: 24
Views: 11981

Re: help me understand lilly?

well then i really don't understand the situation...to me it seems he would have lost if the writers really didnt need a good ending No, I think it's the opposite. If there hadn't been a need for conflict, Lilly would have had no reason to leave at all. I mean, it's not like Hisao did actually do a...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 26, 2015 4:29 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Just finished my first playthrough, this one was emi
Replies: 24
Views: 11981

Re: Comforting Misha

d2r wrote:
brythain wrote:Here, have a very important hint. [LINK]
Hmmm...do you think this was an intentional reference?
Certainly - though maybe not directly.
Even if A22 didn't know the origins of the expression, the subtext of "comfort" is quite pervasive in the English language.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 26, 2015 4:26 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Just finished my first playthrough, this one was emi
Replies: 24
Views: 11981

Re: help me understand lilly?

Well, all of that is just my opinion... how is what he was doing before his second heart attack any different from his supposed mistake of not being there for her? It isn't. I think Hisao is being a huge beta by trying to find the fault with his action instead of with Lilly's. if i had to guess, she...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 26, 2015 4:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - [Concluded!]
Replies: 78
Views: 22121

Re: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - 25/10/15

Plus, I could see it being more interesting if it was a guy that had a crush on Akira and he turned him down, only to get acid thrown on him out of anger be more amusing. "Amusing" might be a poor choice of words... As for Akira being gay... Disappointing for Mono, but it was kind of obvious given ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Oct 25, 2015 9:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117723

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Method & Madness (HanaxRin)" 25/10

“Can you breath now?” She tilts her with an odd expression, almost of surprise, as she asks. Probably her head ... Also, it's "I take a breath" but "I breathe". Verb takes an "e" at the end. Something's been nagging at me for a while. Somehow, your characters seem to have inappropriate vocabularies...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Oct 25, 2015 6:44 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Just finished my first playthrough, this one was emi
Replies: 24
Views: 11981

Re: Comforting Misha

so i'm asking, what happens after misha says she's a lesbian on the roof? and please keep the discussion strictly to hisao and misha,
You get the bad end and everyone's unhappy.

For details read the VN.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 24, 2015 7:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 205
Views: 109904

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.31 Posted 24th October 2015)

Glad you finally posted this.

Interestingly, on the same day I proofread this chapter I also proofread this one.

It made for a nice contrast. That are two versions of Hisao's parent's that could hardly be any more different :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 23, 2015 4:33 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Just finished my first playthrough, this one was emi
Replies: 24
Views: 11981

Re: Just finished my first playthrough, this one was emi

If you want to see the content you missed on Emi's route, you have to listen to Mutou - and later nurse and Meiko when they offer advice. This will also lead to the good end, but you'll see two more scenes - imho very good ones - that are not on the other path. If you want to see the bad end do ever...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 23, 2015 8:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes — [Shizune])

Which doesn't invalidate my point in the slightest.
It's - and I'm exaggerating here - as if I had argued the moon isn't made from cheese and you countered that IF it were it would probably not be Gouda :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 23, 2015 5:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes — [Shizune])

Of course - that would be the meta-assumption. I was talking purely about in-story-assumptions.

If you want to bring Japanese culture into this, I'd say that a divorce is much more unlikely in the first place rather than her simply not being mentioned because of one.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 23, 2015 3:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes — [Shizune])

Not really... In all likelyhood Shizune's mother is dead. Sure there's the distant possibility that she divorced Jigoro and has no contact at all to her family or that she is coincitentally on an extended business trip when Hisao visits, but neither of those possibilities offers an adequate explanat...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Oct 21, 2015 1:02 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1327
Views: 456730

Re: Blooper Reel

The last one is hilarious. It actually works without any of the last three panels...
...but there's a typo in the first panel
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 20, 2015 3:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117723

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "If It Ain't Broke" - 19/10/15

Hmm... While Shizune might be able to close a club, I don't think she has the authority to prohibit the sudents from playing RPGs in their free time...