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by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 11, 2015 12:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 2 Complete 12

You know you could say that Chisato actually looks a bit like Sophie now and Saki now looks more like what Chisato looked like before :D . So the two have in a way swapped round their hairstyle's in the past. Saki looking a bit like Sophie from FF8, yes that fits nicely I think with how I get the s...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 11, 2015 9:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 2 Complete 12

I'm away from the forums for two days and I miss one update and more than a page's worth of comments... Excellent chapter again. Best part was probably Hisao watching the photos, but the end was also adorable. The second playthrough though let me focus on some of the different aspects of her route i...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Dec 09, 2015 4:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [11/25/17]
Replies: 48
Views: 27963

Re: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [12/8/15]

I shuffle through the books at random, plucking interesting spines off haphazardly. Naughty Hisao... Vandalizing the library on his first visit :-) Sat under a tree, laptop rested lazily against it, he seems content. Should be "sitting" - unless somebody actually sat him there. Interesting. You're ...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Dec 08, 2015 3:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [11/25/17]
Replies: 48
Views: 27963

Re: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [12/7/15]

Welcome back! The story so far looks good, both grammar and style. Two small nitpicks: The section where Yuu and Ayao join the trio seems to be missing one or two words which makes it a bit confusing to read. Also 3-2 is for vision impaired students, but so far neither of them seems to ave problems ...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Dec 08, 2015 3:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yuletide Yamaku - The Yamaku Reader Story (Updated Dec 19)
Replies: 46
Views: 21124

Re: Yuletide Yamaku - The Yamaku Reader Story (Updated Dec 1

Damn, when I saw this updated it got my hopes up prematurely :?
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 05, 2015 5:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes—[Akira/Lilly])

BWL? Are they doing Timewarped classic raids now? Didn't see anything like that in the patchnotes? Anyway... "The Manly Tea Party" is the tamer one of Kosher's two most read stories. I always liked the way he could pull plottwists out of nowhere - to the point where I started reading his stories whi...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 04, 2015 12:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117723

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Cordially Invited - Act 2" 3/12/15

Hmm... I see you borrowed another character from another fanfiction...
Hi Marcus!
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Dec 02, 2015 9:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117723

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Cordially Invited" 1/12/15

Well, trust issues like Ritsu has are a surefire way to kill any relationship...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Dec 01, 2015 9:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117723

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Cordially Invited" 1/12/15

Well, given that this is practically a prequel to Miraimyth most of us know how it will end, but it's nice to see it written anyway.

But... Shizune choosing stations on the car radio...?
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 30, 2015 6:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monsters Like Us (KS x Monsters) Ch. 4: Shadows
Replies: 44
Views: 19085

Re: Monsters Like Us (KS x Monsters) Ch.03 Up 2015-11-29

Well this story is certainly better than the anime it is loosely based on.
You gave your characters more... character in one chapter than MonMusu managed in a whole season.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
Replies: 24
Views: 14187

Re: [Newspaper Club Short] What's New?

No, it's probably not something you'd know about Japan unless you've spent some time living there :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 28, 2015 12:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
Replies: 24
Views: 14187

Re: [Newspaper Club Short] What's New?

What got me even more than the notion of celebrating Thanksgiving in Japan, was the ease with wich they were able to acquire Cheddar. Most Japanese think eating coagulated milk is gross, and the only kind of cheese I was able to find in all the time I was there was the processed slices you need to m...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Nov 25, 2015 8:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reliable Narrators
Replies: 30
Views: 14006

Re: Reliable Narrators

The snark is strong in all of the "reliable narrators" I see :-) Very entertaining so far, but I found the bits with Rika a bit tedious and also a bit too exaggerated - in my opinion a character with a trait as extreme as that needs more of a reason/background for it than can be given for a supporti...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Nov 25, 2015 7:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Replies: 15
Views: 7316

Re: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER

Odd grammar has already been commented upon, so I'll keep this to some logic issues: “N-N-Nakai?” He says trying he’s best to say the certain name. Yeah, Mutou is sometims a bit confused, but he is expecting two students one of which is only half-Japanese, so it's unlikely even he would confuse them...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 24, 2015 12:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Good Things Not to Feel [Misha]
Replies: 10
Views: 4911

Re: Good Things Not to Feel [Misha]

Agree with the general consensus: Short. Powerful. Beautiful.