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- Fri Dec 11, 2015 12:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572115
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 2 Complete 12
You know you could say that Chisato actually looks a bit like Sophie now and Saki now looks more like what Chisato looked like before :D . So the two have in a way swapped round their hairstyle's in the past. Saki looking a bit like Sophie from FF8, yes that fits nicely I think with how I get the s...
- Fri Dec 11, 2015 9:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572115
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 2 Complete 12
I'm away from the forums for two days and I miss one update and more than a page's worth of comments... Excellent chapter again. Best part was probably Hisao watching the photos, but the end was also adorable. The second playthrough though let me focus on some of the different aspects of her route i...
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 4:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [11/25/17]
- Replies: 48
- Views: 27963
Re: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [12/8/15]
I shuffle through the books at random, plucking interesting spines off haphazardly. Naughty Hisao... Vandalizing the library on his first visit :-) Sat under a tree, laptop rested lazily against it, he seems content. Should be "sitting" - unless somebody actually sat him there. Interesting. You're ...
- Tue Dec 08, 2015 3:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [11/25/17]
- Replies: 48
- Views: 27963
Re: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [12/7/15]
Welcome back! The story so far looks good, both grammar and style. Two small nitpicks: The section where Yuu and Ayao join the trio seems to be missing one or two words which makes it a bit confusing to read. Also 3-2 is for vision impaired students, but so far neither of them seems to ave problems ...
- Tue Dec 08, 2015 3:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yuletide Yamaku - The Yamaku Reader Story (Updated Dec 19)
- Replies: 46
- Views: 21124
Re: Yuletide Yamaku - The Yamaku Reader Story (Updated Dec 1
Damn, when I saw this updated it got my hopes up prematurely 
- Sat Dec 05, 2015 5:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 573206
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes—[Akira/Lilly])
BWL? Are they doing Timewarped classic raids now? Didn't see anything like that in the patchnotes? Anyway... "The Manly Tea Party" is the tamer one of Kosher's two most read stories. I always liked the way he could pull plottwists out of nowhere - to the point where I started reading his stories whi...
- Fri Dec 04, 2015 12:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
- Replies: 339
- Views: 117723
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Cordially Invited - Act 2" 3/12/15
Hmm... I see you borrowed another character from another fanfiction...
Hi Marcus!
Hi Marcus!
- Wed Dec 02, 2015 9:06 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
- Replies: 339
- Views: 117723
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Cordially Invited" 1/12/15
Well, trust issues like Ritsu has are a surefire way to kill any relationship...
- Tue Dec 01, 2015 9:30 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
- Replies: 339
- Views: 117723
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Cordially Invited" 1/12/15
Well, given that this is practically a prequel to Miraimyth most of us know how it will end, but it's nice to see it written anyway.
But... Shizune choosing stations on the car radio...?
But... Shizune choosing stations on the car radio...?
- Mon Nov 30, 2015 6:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Monsters Like Us (KS x Monsters) Ch. 4: Shadows
- Replies: 44
- Views: 19085
Re: Monsters Like Us (KS x Monsters) Ch.03 Up 2015-11-29
Well this story is certainly better than the anime it is loosely based on.
You gave your characters more... character in one chapter than MonMusu managed in a whole season.
You gave your characters more... character in one chapter than MonMusu managed in a whole season.
- Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
- Replies: 24
- Views: 14187
Re: [Newspaper Club Short] What's New?
No, it's probably not something you'd know about Japan unless you've spent some time living there 
- Sat Nov 28, 2015 12:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
- Replies: 24
- Views: 14187
Re: [Newspaper Club Short] What's New?
What got me even more than the notion of celebrating Thanksgiving in Japan, was the ease with wich they were able to acquire Cheddar. Most Japanese think eating coagulated milk is gross, and the only kind of cheese I was able to find in all the time I was there was the processed slices you need to m...
- Wed Nov 25, 2015 8:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reliable Narrators
- Replies: 30
- Views: 14006
Re: Reliable Narrators
The snark is strong in all of the "reliable narrators" I see :-) Very entertaining so far, but I found the bits with Rika a bit tedious and also a bit too exaggerated - in my opinion a character with a trait as extreme as that needs more of a reason/background for it than can be given for a supporti...
- Wed Nov 25, 2015 7:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
- Replies: 15
- Views: 7316
Re: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Odd grammar has already been commented upon, so I'll keep this to some logic issues: “N-N-Nakai?” He says trying he’s best to say the certain name. Yeah, Mutou is sometims a bit confused, but he is expecting two students one of which is only half-Japanese, so it's unlikely even he would confuse them...
- Tue Nov 24, 2015 12:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Good Things Not to Feel [Misha]
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4911
Re: Good Things Not to Feel [Misha]
Agree with the general consensus: Short. Powerful. Beautiful.