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Well, mostly to Akio and I
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leaving Takashi and I alone under his umbrella.

"me" in both cases.

Otherwise a very nice version of Rin!

I wake up to the piercing rhythm of my cheap alarm clock, stabbing the calm sleep I earned with my long day yesterday. General tip: Use adjectives sparingly. An overabundance of them is usually a good indication of bad writing. Dime novelists like to use them a lot because they get paid by wordcoun...

Merci pour votre avis. Je ne suis pas sur le français 'équipe de traduction, mais sur l'allemand, donc je ne peux pas réparer ces erreurs - et mon français est loin d'être couramment :-) Je voulais juste que vous sachiez que je ne pense pas que l'un d'eux est actif sur ces forums. La traduction fran...

I didn't. I wrote "nobody said anything about [Rika] (still) having white hair" implying that she might have dyed it.

Well, Rika would be an obvious name, even if nobody said anything about her (still) having white hair, and of course my secret favourite from Developments, Nori...
Yuki and Mayumi are quite common names. I'm sure they appear in KS fiction more than once.

It's Ta-ro - no special emphasis anywhere.
Noticed a few cameos from other fics. Nicely done. Too bad none of the guys other than Kenji are still available.

Don't be to keen to push out all of your backlog. Having a backlog is a luxury you'll wish you had kept when it's gone :-) A few issues with the last two chapters: Hisao is taking several kinds of pills every morning, not just one. In this version Emi is really not to blame for Hisao being stupid, s...

Ah, I think I know what you meant now. There are indeed a few japanese classrooms that have two entrances - on in the front of the classroom and one further back. The VN never explicitly references this one way or the other, but there is at least one instance (maybe more) where Shizune and Misha blo...

Just download and see for yourself

Well, there is the HD-version

Congratulations on finishing!

A few more grammar issues in this one: They're sat at a circle table, They're sitting . "To sit" only takes passive if someone is being sat ON or if someone orders someone to sit somewhere. I did a bit of studying while While? She seemingly vibrates, before silently picking up her book and exiting t...

Also I don't think you need to worry about spoilers four years after KS was released.

And anyone who clicks on a thread named "Venting about Shizune's Bad ending" and complains about being spoiled afterwards should take a mandatory crashcourse in "the internet"

I was suspecting Kenji from the start but I was having doubts because in the whole story there is no indication of his blindness...
One thing probably caused by autocorrect. Seriously, turn that off ^^°

the silence being to get to me.

Actually, him changing personalities between chapters would be worse, so you probably should just stick with yout characterization so far. But speaking retroactively there was no real reason for Nomiya to get so angry about Saki leaving the club - even less so than there was with Rin: Nomiya probabl...