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Now that's a typical oddball story if ever I've seen one

Ah, yes, I wasn't sure which of her endings that one was based on.
I think there were one or two more, but I wouldn't recommend them to anyone^^°

You'll be pleasantly surprised, I think.

I was - though your reassurance lessened the surprise a bit.
Thank you for refraining from resorting to worn-out clichés.

So... This is just the prologue, right? Could go interesting places with a premise like this. I don't remember any stories that continue on from Shizune's Bad End. One thing I'd recommend when you rewrite a scene from the VN from a different perspective is rereading the scene beforehand and keeping ...

That usually meant one of two things; it was one of our birthdays or I got good grades, neither of which have happened in months. Neither of their birthdays having happened inmonths doesn't mean it couldn't be today... Perhaps the last Monomyth story, since I've already futzed with the naming conve...

Spoilers: that songs is the cheeriest part of the show

By a loooong shot

Hadn't heard the english version of that OP before. Is there already an english release? Because I might have to get that...

3 stories completed within your Monomyth universe, well done on the quality. I don't think you're truly done with this universe seeing as 2 of the couples aren't together and Hisao/Shizune aren't married yet (if I read this right) :P. Personally, I don't believe ending a story when every single cha...

A bit too dakr for my tastes... Well, since I read the chapter I might as well give some feedback: even though I am now twelve years of age my eyes still light up She would have been fifteen when she started at Yamaku, not twelve. A bit further down it gets quite chaotic because the dream scenes are...

Yup, that last chapter was pretty heavy but fear not! It's smooth sailing from here on out and look!

Was that supposed to be sarcastic?

Interesting to see the perspective of someone who read this in one go, as opposed to those of us who followed from chapter to chapter over the course of... two years? Man it's been a long time...

"Now I'm sure you know why we're meeting today, so I'd like to ask you about your side of the story."

Shouldn't he have asked that before deciding on their respective punishments?

Nice chapter!
I do dread the almost-double-date, though. I t has way too much potential to go horribly wrong, and most of those would probably involve my head meting the desk several times quite forcibly^^°

It took me quite a while to completely place this story...
An extended hiatus will do that ^^°

But it doesn't, it clearly says, "I got bullied a lot, I was called names and got excluded from work groups and sports teams.[FULL STOP] there were... Worse things too." That Full Stop doesn't remove the ambiguous meaning in the slightest - especially not in direct speech. Also: [defiantly] You're ...

“Tomorrow?” Taro asks tentatively, wincing as he does so. “I’ll meet you at that coffee shop near your apartment?”

"When?"

"I don't care."

"Okay, I'll be there, but don't be late!"