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I agree those pics are adorable, but in the one with the wheelchair I had a lot of trouble deciding whose face we are seeing. I assume it is Saki's, but it looks a bit like her face is located on the side of her head^^°

Oldest stories indeed. Must have been years since I last read those... Empty Hallways ins interesting in that most of Emi's backstory wasn't in place when it was written. The accident where she lost her legs apparently happened during her time at Yamaku - no idea why she would have been there in the...

I sent you a few suggestions, but personally I think doing a whole bunch of stories at once is quite tiresome. I'd much rather go over one story (or a few shorts) in a shorter interval than reading half a dozen and struggling to write something about every one of them. Also, you'll exhaust the libra...

I wouldn't go so far... If I thought the previous chapters were bad, I would have spoken out before now, but you have to know where you want to go with the story and whether or not this is salvageable...

Well, for Kyouko I had that impression earlier, but until now Sora seemed to be more bewildered than reciprocrating... But in this chapter she literally could not think of anything but Kyouko to the extent that she missed an entire morning of lessons and completely neglected any effort to make other...

an attitude of being unwilling to give into what’s brought them here. "to give in_to what’s brought them here." One thing that worries me about this story is the pacing. It's not that you're glossing over too many details - in fact it's quite the opposite; it's all very detailed, and you spent 9 no...

Arai is… the fat guy Hisao was with a couple weeks back?

They ran into Taro just before going to the pool iIrc...

Of course you will, and of course we don't
BTW, it took me halfway through the chapter to realize you made a time skip of several weeks - which put the first half in a different perspective. You might want to make that clear a bit earlier.

A lot of seemingly abandoned stories are getting picked up again recently... Nice to see Molly get some attention again. Two or three typos or missing words like here: As she walks open the door to the girl’s dorm, or here Thought I was you and began going off about how needed your help but much bet...

An easy way to check which pronoun to use is to simply omit the "Hanako and" part and see if what remains makes any sense, in this case: but does it have to do with Hanako and I dating?” but does it have to do with Hanako and me dating?” Given those two options only very few people would say that th...

but does it have to do with Hanako and I dating?” ... It definitely is something to do with Hanako and I dating. "Hanako and me" in both cases I sat on the bed with her and recounted to her what happened and what was said in our talk. She was visibly dismayed when I told her my conclusion. Slipping...

I guess the break would be a bit confusing here, but there is no time skip between the first and second parts of the chapter. I'm not sure how I would clarify that without breaking the flow that the chapter has when it's in one chunk. Well, the previous part ended with Kyouko telling Sora that she ...

he gave Miki and I quite the shock "Miki and me" Happened one more time further up, but that was Miki talking, so it's excusable. I wasn’t bad in school per say "per se" Him and I were two tornadoes in a field "He and I" Funny. Usually I'd expect people to make the other mistake writing "He and me"...

the festival they’d just mentioned. I had heard only a bit about it, but my limited experience with attending other high school festivals told me that they typically weren’t anything to get worked over. This section is past tene - also probably "worked UP over" I can navigate on my own and all.” Sh...

So... Hisao fell in? At the end of the last chapter I kinda thougth he jumped in because he was worried about Rika staying too long underwater... How did he fall in when he was sitting at the corner of the pool? I also didn't get that she had a minor heart attack until she told Fuuka - I guess Hisao...