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... Well, that's one hell of a surprise ending O.o

Also, you totally made me hate Hisao here ">_> Congratulations

"tough", means something along the lines of 'firm', or depending on context, 'sucks to be you'. "though" is more something like 'on the other hand...' I'm guessing it's this you had intended Third of this particular example of horrifying english for the rest of the world is "thought", but I'm hoping...

Not sure I get the paprinka thing O.o Otherwise, not bad at all

Smoku wrote:“Mutou. Akio Mutou”

About time

Keep kicking ass here, Smoku ^_^ Minor nitpick: tough --> though...

This took me a while to be anywhere close to satisfied with -_-" Apologies for the delay (and the double post ">_>) =======Chapter 10======= "Tenth Misgiving" When I finally exit the dorms again, it's half past nine. I must've been standing on the track field for over an hour for it to be this late...

... That's either a lot of dedication, or a -lot- of boredom O.o

Either way, very, very impressive piece of work.

Aww, geesh, you really made me feel that one... *sniffles*

Seriously, man, keep it up.

Okay off to comment to Kosher, I love that guys latest story he's having me proofread. *snickers because he knows what Neuman is talking about* :3 Anyway, much d'awwww to be had here ^_^ I'm gonna go out on a limb and guess Hisao's parents will soon return home and find them all cuddled up? :P And ...

Rut-roh O.o

DUCK!


One thing I keep seeing: "tough" instead of "though" >_> But since that's supposedly a common mistake for non-native english folks, it's not that big a nuisance <_<

People voted for Emi and Rin? O.o

... Then again, Kenji's not one to note a missing limb or two...

Mirage_GSM wrote: The narration is a bit unconventional. At some points Hisao is adressing the reader directly, as if he were in the room with him, at others... not. Gives the whole a bit of an inconsistent feel.

I'm guessing that's the Suzumiya Haruhi bit Neuman was referring to

Fun read, though ^_^

I'm wondering how you'll introduce the other KS characters...

This just keeps getting better and better ^_^

Why bother to translate it to such an ugly language as German? For the lulz? But in all seriousness, probably the same reason there's a French translation, and one in Chinese, and one in Japanese, and so on... To make it more accessible for people in their own country/language region who suck at En...

TipsyRooster wrote: subconsciously I had given every single character the voice of another anime character, some of them characters I can't even remember the name of.

I do that consciously ">_> Which of us do you think is worse?