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PlatonicRabbit wrote: Where this is going, I like. MOAR.

That is a bit of a Wham Line, innit?

So they play chess with special rules, huh? I wonder what these rules might be like :wink: :mrgreen: I hate the Sicilian defence... Well, I didn't pick the game based on the defense. :P ---------------------------------------- Chapter 2 Twenty Minutes Ago: She enters the room and sits down on the o...

I don't have a problem with it. That's why there are multiple play-throughs.

Ah. Sorry to burst your bubble, Ar.

And bradpara: The unlikeliness of it was what made me wonder how to make it happen.

Pretty good so far, wonder if you'll do the whole story as diary entries or just the prologue, either way it was still a good read. Just the Prologue. ---------------------------------------- Chapter 1 Twenty Minutes Ago: How did this happen? How could I have fallen so hard for this girl? This girl...

Okay, I wanted to get far enough ahead that I felt confident I could get the story where I wanted, so here's the beginning of a new story. Thanks to Mirage_GSM and Leotrak for giving it a look. Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Now with shimmie art! Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Now with shimmie art! Chapter 5 Chapter 6 No...

Growing old is inevitable. Growing up is optional.

Rocket Royal wrote:I also accidentally a word somewhere.

Yeah, I see what you did there.

Some changes you missed:

'kneeled' not 'knelled'

'flail' not 'frail'

'even silent, was the same' not 'even silent, is the same'

'and she stirred' not 'and stirred'

And I like the additions you made. It does flow better. Nicely done; looking forward to your next one.

neumanproductions wrote:Especially since I now have many ideas on what it would look like if Hisaoman was to absorb the powers of the cripplegirls.

Hmm, do I sense a new fanfic being written?

Jaden82 wrote:Expect this story to be "Jossed" when the final release comes out. Until then, enjoy this installment and the fanfic.

Guaranteed to happen to 99% of the fanfic here.

Oh, and fixed.

PasterOfMuppets wrote:"JESUS TAKE THE WWEEEEEEEEEEL!!!"

Urg! I hate that song.

I certainly could see a confession from Hanako setting off Hisao's heart. And then misinterpretation on Hanako's part. Well done. I've been thinking about writing a fanfic but I just joined and I wondered if it's too soon to do that. It's never too early, but we appreciate good editing. I edit someo...

Well, given the game starts in June, the only birthday you'd have to worry about is Hanako's.

It's Shizune's birthday again!

Man, can't believe I almost forgot.