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This girl looks quite a bit like Shizune. The hilarious part is that her name is Lilly.

Chapter 5 Twenty Minutes Ago: Once again I wonder how it is that I’ve agreed to such a ridiculous game. Then I look into her eyes. “Oh, that’s right,” I think, as I melt again. -------------------- One Month Ago: Catharsis. Never before had that word carried so much personal meaning for me. Hanako ...

I've heard some good stuff about the new MLP cartoon, but maybe it gets a little too dark.

Thank you, Ar. I appreciate that, given the end goal is not to your tastes.

Ha! Nice changes BTW. Though I think Hanako's finishing move could read a little better.

Instead of: quickly spun Kenji’s body into his room with and he landed

I suggest: quickly spun Kenji’s body into his room where he landed


'Finishing move'. Hilarious.

Steed & Peel or Marvel?

Sperance wrote:I can’t contemplate upon his appearance, of course,

It's Lilly.

Let me tell you, I had a hard time writing this chapter. After I typed out "Liar.", I could barely look at it for a good 5-10 minutes.

Chapter 4 Twenty Minutes Ago: “So who have you been playing against? There’s no rival for my affections I should be watching out for, is there?” she signs, keeping her smile so I know she isn’t serious. “I’ve practiced through the Internet, so I don’t even know who I’m playing.” “Risky. You never k...

Roy-Kr wrote:At the moment i'm making a dinosaur do the thriller.

And now I'm reminded of a comic book where a character mentioned having Godzilla playing the Claude Rains part in 'Casablanca'.

I think you're right, Leotrak. Looking at it again, they definitely look younger.

Besides, Shizune's breasts aren't that small.

Chapter 3 Twenty Minutes Ago: “So are you ready to start?” she signs. “Impatient to get your inevitable loss out of the way?” I sign back. She smiles that wonderful smile at me. “Aren’t we confident. Been getting more practice games in?” “Yes, I have.” -------------------- One And A Half Months Ago...

How about this for breaking the stereotype: I'm over 40, married 9 years, first marriage for both, and I tell my wife about writing fanfic for Katawa Shoujo.

scott1and wrote:giving us a part of the story near the end at the start shows youve planned this out at least a bit

That's why I had to have so much of it written first. The 'Twenty Minutes Ago' has gone through the most changes. I'm still tweaking it.