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I like these. I love the look Hanako has in the first one. It's a different 'angry' look than we usually see.

You know, Shizune in this story really reminds of this Shimmie picture.

That's a good thing, BTW.

I have to echo Mirage's comment, though he summed up my feelings better than I would have been able to. When I saw how this thread started, my first thought was, "Oh no, not another one of these!" It's really turned me off of OCs in the fanfics here.

You should really register for the forums so you can edit your posts.

That said, I'm not a big fan of taking the KS characters out of the high school drama genre. There are a couple stories here that did it well, and I enjoyed them very much. So far I'm not seeing that here. Sorry, just not my thing.

charmisokay wrote:Rename this thing to "criminal girls"

He can't. He hasn't registered for the forums.

xaolindragon wrote:Massive amounts of feels, man. And goddamn do I really need to hurry up and finish Rin's story to get to Lilly's (saving best for last )

Dammit man! What the hell are you doing wasting time on the forums when you aren't done with the game yet?

The Decision I don’t like waiting in line. Considered one of the most quintessential Japanese qualities and I just don’t like it. Waiting isn’t the problem. I have patience in good measure. It’s when I have to do it in a queue that I have difficulty. That’s when a dependence on others is forced upo...

Oh that was nice. Good way to draw in Lilly's good end, too. One typo I found: She steps out of the cubicle with the top in hand and, as if she thinks I won't notice, tries to sneak of to the checkout herself. I grab the top from her hands, and reassure her that I'm still buying it for her. Correcti...

Yeah, I know, what a shock there are typos. Anyway, since there doesn't seem to be a thread devoted to all typos, I thought I'd create one. Just in case there's an incremental release to clean up mistakes. :D My decision on whether or not it's a typo or just the way they talk: if it's Lilly or Shizu...

KS directed by Michael Bay... Opening: Iwanako: Hisao, do you want to be- WHATEVER, EXPLOSIONS Act 1: NO, ACTUALLY, EXPLOSIONS NO FURTHER ACTS JUST EXPLOSIONS AND MISHA IN A RIPPED TANKTOP WAHAHAHA~ Dual wielding M60's, of course :D Ahh what a sight... :D Not dual M60s, but how about this?

This will be central location for the writing I've done. I got the idea for a shorter story than I've done before, so I'll be putting it here along with any other short pieces I write later. Meanwhile, here are links to my previous longer ones. Keep in mind that these were written before the full re...

I'll admit, I had some trepidation about the porn warning, but this was very good. Nice to see more Shizune stories.

gecko wrote:A guy is hunched there, mixing the rhythmic noise that's driving me blind.

I think you might have meant a different loss of sensing there…

Evvinartopski wrote:Everyone just writes Nomiya off as the world's biggest asshole

???

Surely he can't be higher than second biggest.

Jigoro

It didn't make me cry, but there were definitely times my eyes got a little moist. Good job.