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Ivan The Mouse wrote:Tss. I hope you guys don't hate KS because it isn't as obscure as any VN out there.

Didn't you know? If it becomes popular, it sucks.

tony246 wrote:Hm, I just thought of something, is there a way to somehow divide Hisao into like 5-6, just to cover every heroine?

Yes.

Some fixes for chapter two: - “Green always been my favorite color, but I didn’t really thought think about that... I'd change 'didn't' to 'hadn't' and keep 'thought'. Also: “Yes, both. There is a forest behind us, on the other side of the road, and Yamaku’s park got has lot s of grass and a few tr...

Creepy…

This kind of story is not normally something I'm interested in. Yet somehow, I want to know what happens next.

Just reread all of your stories here. I'm glad to say that your writing is much better now than it was when you started. I actually found it difficult to read the stories before 'Sorry'.

Only one glaring grammar error that I noticed. Does that even make sense? I might be loosing my mind to her, but I don't care at this point. You mean 'losing' (to become without), not 'loosing' (to untie). I look forward to more on this. Not quite sure where you're going yet. The conflict hasn't bee...

It was definitely Rin's path in which he wrote Iwanako back. I did Rin's path first, and after that I was surprised that he didn't write back in any of the others. Great job. I was really looking forward to the party. Only one grammar comment from me. [I am being nice. Still, you, Misha, and me did ...

Looks like the links in your sig still go to old versions.

Nice work. The only suggestion I have is to make it more explicit which scene begins each act.

Interesting chapter. Some typos again but nothing major. Some miscellaneous remarks: - If this is their first year, Misha should still have her long hair. - Rin doesn't name her paintings. - Rin generally seems a bit OOC in this scene, but, hey, par for the course ;-) No, Florinu123 established in ...

Indignant! Yes, that's the word. I couldn't come up with that when I was writing my previous comment.

I ended up using the walkthrough to get a few scenes from Act 1. I've played it enough times that I didn't need a walkthrough for the final release. Once out of Act 1, I didn't use any walkthroughs, getting everything on my own to 100% completion. I first made the choices that I thought would get me...

Where is mentioned in my sig. When was soon after the Act 1 release.

That first line will be very confusing until you change the first 'Rin' to 'Emi'.

You had me thinking this was going to be much more surreal than it turned out.

Interesting work. A few typos here and there, but nothing major. If you're trying to tie this into canon though, there are a few problems. I'm pretty sure Hanako has been at the school for three years when we meet her. I don't think it was her choice to go to Yamaku, either. The one I'm most sure of...