Combination of both I think. You did write 'With Apologies' after all. *shudder*Doomish wrote:Also, do you mean outside of your comfort zone as in content or writing style? Just wondering.
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- Fri Feb 24, 2012 11:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 86
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Re: Little Faith [Lilly Good Ending Extension, Spoilers, Sci
- Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
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Re: Little Faith [Lilly Good Ending Extension, Spoilers, Sci
Hisao grunted. “Fine, you can tell me later; but we have to Inverness. All I ask is that you explain to me why I don’t feel weird about this-“ he gestured to the air around him, “-barely even concerns me.” 'have to go to Inverness' I think is what you want. The rest reads a little confusing. Perhap...
- Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Strictly a Pulmonary matter (Feedback appreciated)
- Replies: 33
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- Fri Feb 24, 2012 5:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
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Re: 2400 words from a path never written.
Just because students are second years doesn't preclude them from being at least 18. Emi's 19 after all.
O I C Wut U Did Thar!CNB wrote:"All things considered, best fucking night of my life so far."
- Fri Feb 24, 2012 3:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Strictly a Pulmonary matter (Feedback appreciated)
- Replies: 33
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Re: Strictly a Pulmonary matter (Feedback appreciated)
Huh? Yes they are. Perhaps you're confusing it with 'wreck'? 'Wreak' is the word he wants though.Mirage_GSM wrote:"It'd reek havoc on your body, Dresner."
Should probably be "wreak". Not even a homophone this time.
- Thu Feb 23, 2012 12:30 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Numbered Days
- Replies: 117
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Re: Numbered Days
And with the release of the full game, it turns out Hanako is actually better off being brought back -- it seems to mean she still has a mother, no orphanage, etc. That's only because, prior to the full release, only Hanako's dad was known to have died in the fire. In the Ask! thread, the reason gi...
- Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.
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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.
Nomiya in his hipster days.GIRakaCHEEZER wrote:Also who is that person with the pink glasses?
- Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
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Re: Little Faith
Thank you.Doomish wrote:And, I promise, there's not going to be any gore or body horror this time. The fact that I even have to say this is kind of funny.
- Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
- Replies: 47
- Views: 29138
Re: 2400 words from a path never written.
Yeah, that was better. Good job.themocaw wrote:I made a change to the second to last section, based on feedback: it's no longer about Saki's disability, but about the distance she and Hisao put between each other.
- Wed Feb 22, 2012 8:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 24827
Re: New Experiences
O I C Wut U Did TharDaitengu wrote:Though I could see her just latching onto who ever is nice, that'd be rather a terrible back petal in character development, so I don't think it's likely.
- Wed Feb 22, 2012 8:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: Drawing some fanarts
- Replies: 26
- Views: 14812
Re: Hisao's question
How does that video help? It's a static picture with instrumental music.GIRakaCHEEZER wrote:Also there's an alt text version here, but it won't make sense unless you've seen this video.
- Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:05 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Does else anyone here have my problem
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4744
Re: Does else anyone here have my problem
But to avoid the Bad Ends and not get that remaining 7% to full completion. Is a Discredit to the team at 4LS. Here's a group of people who worked over the last 5 years make a wonderful product. To not enjoy it in it's entirety, to lack the desire to intricately explore every facet of this wonderfu...
Re: KS Inspired VN Project Survey
My only complaint about the survey is the choices about the h-scenes. It's not a case of wanting h-scenes, but if they are present, I'd want them handled tastefully.
- Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ten Summers Later
- Replies: 30
- Views: 14088
Re: Ten Summers Later
Oh, didn't notice this the first time: 'hers' doesn't get an apostrophe. Ever.FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!”
- Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:15 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 44268
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-4 Complete
I'm at least interested in seeing where this is going. Nothing really strikes me as particularly good or bad. I can be patient.
One correction: 'storeroom' is one word in the sense you're using it.
One correction: 'storeroom' is one word in the sense you're using it.