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by griffon8
Fri Feb 24, 2012 11:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 86
Views: 26125

Re: Little Faith [Lilly Good Ending Extension, Spoilers, Sci

Doomish wrote:Also, do you mean outside of your comfort zone as in content or writing style? Just wondering.
Combination of both I think. You did write 'With Apologies' after all. *shudder*
by griffon8
Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 86
Views: 26125

Re: Little Faith [Lilly Good Ending Extension, Spoilers, Sci

Hisao grunted. “Fine, you can tell me later; but we have to Inverness. All I ask is that you explain to me why I don’t feel weird about this-“ he gestured to the air around him, “-barely even concerns me.” 'have to go to Inverness' I think is what you want. The rest reads a little confusing. Perhap...
by griffon8
Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Strictly a Pulmonary matter (Feedback appreciated)
Replies: 33
Views: 9555

Re: Strictly a Pulmonary matter (Feedback appreciated)

Strange. Dictionary.com gives identical pronunciation for both 'reek' and 'wreak'.
by griffon8
Fri Feb 24, 2012 5:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

Re: 2400 words from a path never written.

Just because students are second years doesn't preclude them from being at least 18. Emi's 19 after all.
CNB wrote:"All things considered, best fucking night of my life so far."
O I C Wut U Did Thar!
by griffon8
Fri Feb 24, 2012 3:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Strictly a Pulmonary matter (Feedback appreciated)
Replies: 33
Views: 9555

Re: Strictly a Pulmonary matter (Feedback appreciated)

Mirage_GSM wrote:"It'd reek havoc on your body, Dresner."
Should probably be "wreak". Not even a homophone this time.
Huh? Yes they are. Perhaps you're confusing it with 'wreck'? 'Wreak' is the word he wants though.
by griffon8
Thu Feb 23, 2012 12:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Numbered Days
Replies: 117
Views: 48358

Re: Numbered Days

And with the release of the full game, it turns out Hanako is actually better off being brought back -- it seems to mean she still has a mother, no orphanage, etc. That's only because, prior to the full release, only Hanako's dad was known to have died in the fire. In the Ask! thread, the reason gi...
by griffon8
Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:40 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.
Replies: 28
Views: 11172

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

GIRakaCHEEZER wrote:Also who is that person with the pink glasses?
Nomiya in his hipster days.
by griffon8
Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 86
Views: 26125

Re: Little Faith

Doomish wrote:And, I promise, there's not going to be any gore or body horror this time. The fact that I even have to say this is kind of funny.
Thank you.
by griffon8
Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

Re: 2400 words from a path never written.

themocaw wrote:I made a change to the second to last section, based on feedback: it's no longer about Saki's disability, but about the distance she and Hisao put between each other.
Yeah, that was better. Good job. :cry:
by griffon8
Wed Feb 22, 2012 8:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Experiences
Replies: 81
Views: 24827

Re: New Experiences

Daitengu wrote:Though I could see her just latching onto who ever is nice, that'd be rather a terrible back petal in character development, so I don't think it's likely.
O I C Wut U Did Thar :twisted:
by griffon8
Wed Feb 22, 2012 8:39 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Drawing some fanarts
Replies: 26
Views: 14812

Re: Hisao's question

GIRakaCHEEZER wrote:Also there's an alt text version here, but it won't make sense unless you've seen this video.
How does that video help? It's a static picture with instrumental music.
by griffon8
Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:05 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Does else anyone here have my problem
Replies: 16
Views: 4744

Re: Does else anyone here have my problem

But to avoid the Bad Ends and not get that remaining 7% to full completion. Is a Discredit to the team at 4LS. Here's a group of people who worked over the last 5 years make a wonderful product. To not enjoy it in it's entirety, to lack the desire to intricately explore every facet of this wonderfu...
by griffon8
Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:51 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: sdfsd
Replies: 18
Views: 7170

Re: KS Inspired VN Project Survey

My only complaint about the survey is the choices about the h-scenes. It's not a case of wanting h-scenes, but if they are present, I'd want them handled tastefully.
by griffon8
Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ten Summers Later
Replies: 30
Views: 14088

Re: Ten Summers Later

FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!”
Oh, didn't notice this the first time: 'hers' doesn't get an apostrophe. Ever.
by griffon8
Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 44268

Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-4 Complete

I'm at least interested in seeing where this is going. Nothing really strikes me as particularly good or bad. I can be patient.

One correction: 'storeroom' is one word in the sense you're using it.