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It's a little early to comment on the story. Nice 'friends' your protagonist had. Hope his parents sued them.

I would appreciate it if you came along, though. I don’t like being the only girl their sometimes.

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Interesting development. But I thought Misha thought of herself as gay, not bisexual. I could be remembering things incorrectly though.

Oh, and because of that chapter title I can't get that song about the KKK beating up gay jewish black dudes out of my head... (Come to think of it, I don't even know the original...) Ha! That's exactly what happened with me. And I'm glad I didn't get around to reading this until you removed all the...

A nice little Rin story there. Good philosophizing.

That said, you changed tenses a few times and used 'could' when you meant 'cloud' in several places.

Oh, hey, you're right. I totally misread that.

The first one is still funny.

lolawesome wrote:I write silly little stories

And the stuff I've written gets the reaction of 'dawwwwwww'. But I'm going to write it anyway.

Doomish is a great writer, but I can't read his stuff.

Leaty wrote:I don't want to give anything away, really, but I suppose I must concede that I do, in fact, know I want to.

… Proceed.

Finally, a Misha path!

Chapter 10: Rain "Unfortunately I'm the only one here at this time, I imagine Hisao and Hanako are doing something together, those two are piratically inseparable," Yar! Hoist the yardarm! Bring the ship alongside! Ready the cannons! Chapter 11: Further I watch as the game progresses, and I clearly...

Oh damn, I just realized. This friend 'Ken' is going to be Kenji in the MMO.

Mirage, sometimes you seem to give yourself the most interesting tasks. Writing KS as an MMO has got to be one of the strangest.

I am enjoying this. It was interesting trying to figure out who the character was from the first chapter, but until the meeting with Nurse, I couldn't even tell what gender your protagonist was. Anyway, KS does take place in 2007. Lilly gives a date of Friday, June 8th at one point in Act 1, and 200...

Unusual for me, I had a notion for a little Rin piece. Found it easier to get in her head for some reason. Maybe it's all the pain killers I've had to take… Anyway, here it is. ---------------------------------------- Questions With And Without Answers “Hisao?” Rin prods me slightly with her foot wh...

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Beoran wrote:TV Tropes

I hate you.

Hey at least he didn't include a link.

yummines wrote:Tvtropes: the single largest archive of useless knowledge, resulting in you having 6 tabs open

I refer to it as a black hole that will destroy all your free time.

I thought chapter 10 was one of your best. I actually liked that you skipped over the fight with the other three horsemen, as I don't actually think the battles were the point of this whole story. As for how much background of Marvel characters to use, I suggest going very minimal. Any fans of the c...

Sure, enough, the familiar face from my face day of school looks in my direction and looks me over for a second. Her face then breaks into a smile. “Oh, I remember you! The wrestler guy, right? It’s been a while.” d'oh You corrected the error in the second post. You have two posts that are identica...