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Very nice. I knew how it was going to end, but it was still effective.

Just one minor thing: Nobel Prizes are not given posthumously.

Actually, the timeline you present says that Hisao became a doctor by the age of 27. That would be… exceptional.

themocaw wrote:Okay, which one of you cripplef--kers made a full-out tropes page for this nonsense on TVTropes? >:[

(Honestly more amused than upset, btw.)

Well, if you click on the 'history' button, we discover that it was bradpara.

nemz wrote:This story in one word: "Adorkable"

Ha! Yes, that is certainly the word for it.

Best chapter yet, I think.

Breaker deGodot wrote:Sounds to me like Shizune has a bun in the oven, if you know what I mean .

I agree.

Exceptions are made when the fanfic posted is particularly egregious, either for shitty writing, horrid editing, or the writer is trolling. You're not doing any of that. Examples? Not for the faint of heart. http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2667 http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2948 ht...

ArazelEternal wrote:I have a few other fanfics out there on other sites and some people are just cruel with their comments.

Yeah, I'm glad this is a forum where people are nice about comments. The exceptions I see are well deserved though.

(This fanfic is not an exception.)

Eh, I was thinking along "don't write it if you can't do it well, because then you're just being offensive." Which applies to all writing, really. The guy writing the stuff I edit has been asked about stuff he wrote before. He refuses to tell people what it is or where it can be found on the Intern...

I don’t write erotica, sorry, so you’re stuck with fades to black. The reason I don’t write it is it’s a genre I’m not good at, nothing moral or ethical about it. There should be a rule about straight men writing lesbian romances… The only way to get good at it is to practice… As long as the rule i...

Total Destruction wrote:I couldn't believe he was Shizune's sister; I also couldn't believe he wasn't actually a girl. He wasn't anything like her.

Whoops…

And interesting that Hanako thinks Hideaki is nothing like Shizune given how much Hideaki reminded Hisao of Shizune when meeting Hideaki in Lilly's path.

While it's nice of Molly to stand up for Yuuko, there is no tipping in Japan.

Very enjoyable. More love and attention for the side characters. Even if one of them should be punched out.

I think it's better to leave it left unsaid who this is about.

And you misspelled 'Hisao' at the bottom.

I don't know how good this story is, because I'm not reading it while it is formatted this way.

Excellent! More Misha goodness. I would be surprised if anything started happening between Kelly and Misha, but everyone needs friends who understand what you're going through. Chapter Six: Dinner and a Movie “Oh, there here,” Will said, appearing from the bathroom, “hello.” “Oh, they're here,” Will...

Very enjoyable. Suzu seems to be getting a lot of attention in these here forums of late. Two things that stood out though. Emi & Rin are in 3–4, not 3–1. And I'd be surprised if there were enough runners on Yamaku's track team to field two teams for the relay. It would be much more likely that Emi ...

I updated my old stories with navigation links for easier reading.