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by griffon8
Wed Jun 20, 2012 11:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104986

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/17

My life has been full of references like that. Though my absolute favorite one wasn't made by me.

Friend A says to Friend B that A doesn't like the chips available for the game session they were about to have.

B says, "Do you prefer another snack, a military snack? Then name the snack!"
by griffon8
Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104986

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/17

Hoitash wrote:Stay on topic, Mr. Hoitash.
"Stay on topic."

"We're too close."

"Stay on topic."

"Loosen up!"
by griffon8
Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596641

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/18)

Total Destruction wrote:FUCK YOU AND YOUR DAMNED NARCOLEPTICS GIVING ME WHAT MY MOTHER MUST FEEL WHEN SHE WATCHES THOSE TERRIBLE DAYTIME SOAPS ON CBS
"Other than that, how was the play, Mrs. Lincoln?" :twisted:
by griffon8
Sun Jun 17, 2012 2:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: This Padded Cell I Call A School Updated 17/6
Replies: 19
Views: 7085

Re: This Padded Cell I Call A School Updated 17/6

I guess she wouldn't be as interesting if she kept the other voice quiet all the time. Anyway, I wanted to point out some things from previous chapters: From Part 2: “Nope, your Bat-Shit crayzee Girl!” you're. From Part 3: The Rest of class starts Clapping, and we bow. Apparently, the reason I had t...
by griffon8
Sun Jun 17, 2012 1:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)

Quick poll before I get ready for work: Would anybody object to my writing in a Yamaku student with argyria? It's something I'm giving a fair bit of consideration to, but at the same time I realize it might be regarded as too absurd for the tone of the VN. I'd consider it a little absurd. It's not ...
by griffon8
Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)

Frankly, I'm surprised nobody got angry about Iwanako's hairstyle change. The idea behind it was to ensure that she look as different from Hanako as possible, as she would otherwise look fairly similar. I wanted her to look distinct in a yearbook photo, and my opinion is that what we see of her in ...
by griffon8
Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lilly "Bittersweet" neutral end continuation
Replies: 26
Views: 8235

Re: Lilly "Bittersweet" neutral end continuation

Here's my take on the neutral end. What decisions on Hisao's part lead to the neutral ending? At three points in the game, Hisao is given a choice between being honest with Lilly or hiding something from her. If Hisao fails to be honest all three times, Lilly leaves for Scotland and they break up. W...
by griffon8
Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Taxi ride to nowhere
Replies: 34
Views: 13157

Re: Taxi ride to nowhere

Oddball wrote:Thank ya', and it's OB (For Oddball. You were close but no Kewpie doll for you.)
OP = Original Poster
by griffon8
Tue Jun 12, 2012 6:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596641

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (small update 6/12)

Well the answer is obvious: change all references to 'White Day' to 'Valentine's Day'.
by griffon8
Mon Jun 11, 2012 9:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 8104

Re: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]

No hints needed for me. I know who she is.
If my heat were beating, it might have skipped.
'heart'
by griffon8
Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)

It's a perfectly good place to pause the story. The scene is about to change, so that works.

Heck, check out how short the chapters are to my stories. I had some comments that they were too short, but the breaks were at points that I felt were natural pauses in the story.
by griffon8
Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:04 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lilly)
Replies: 79
Views: 48129

Re: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lil

I wonder if I would have figured out which song to use if you hadn't mentioned XKCD…
by griffon8
Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104986

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/10

Oh, forgot to compliment you on your great Star Wars reference at the end there. :lol:
by griffon8
Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104986

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/10

That has to be one of the most unintentionally hilarious typos I've ever seen. You mean 'unmedicated' of course. Naturally, Firefox doesn't recognize it as a word, but helpfully suggests 'unmediated' as a possible correction. My screen says un-medicated, so do I just need to lose the hyphen? Spell ...
by griffon8
Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 36016

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

Time for a wall of spoiler, because we're talking plot . In the limo guy extra, it's not a supernatural agency, it's a driving company. Before that extra, it's never implied anywhere that he's supernatural. He even goes so far as to decline those accusations himself during the Hanako finale. He dri...