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by griffon8
Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Chapter 10 - Making Waves

Helbereth wrote:
griffon8 wrote:Hmm, there was a 'to' that should have been a 'too', but I can't find it right now.
A hunting I will go...
Can't find it, even looking at every occurrence of 'to' in the post. Probably my mistake.
by griffon8
Sat Jul 21, 2012 8:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Chapter 10 - Making Waves

I've really been writing this at a ridiculous speed (at least by my standard), so posting a new chapter daily isn't terribly surprising. You're spoiling us! To maintain the pretense of my presence, I made sure to have an issue to bring up with Shizune; so, as I ignore Amaya's groaning look, I turn ...
by griffon8
Fri Jul 20, 2012 7:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/20

I suppose it's possible I just think too well of Shizune, but I keep seeing her actions as her way of telling Aiko, "Dammit! Why aren't you moving any faster on Hisao?"
by griffon8
Thu Jul 19, 2012 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Memory Hisao has of Lilly
Replies: 72
Views: 24219

Re: A Memory Hisao has of Lilly

I actually thought that was the most civilized discussion of religion I'd ever seen. Nobody got angry as far as I could tell. So, what flame war?
by griffon8
Thu Jul 19, 2012 3:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
Replies: 145
Views: 65595

Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)

I have read so many of these Routes where they kiss at the fireworks but for some reason it always happens to stab my heart and let all the feels gush out. I spent a lot of time banging my head against the wall to come up different ways I could make the festival interesting and less rehashed. Ultim...
by griffon8
Thu Jul 19, 2012 3:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/17

I'm thinking it's going to be Aiko who has the greater difficulty with day two, seeing as Hisao has already had a 'day two' with running. Of course, Aiko didn't go all out in her workout here, so maybe it will be easier. Thanks for reminding me of that, I'd almost forgotten to reference that thread...
by griffon8
Thu Jul 19, 2012 8:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Un)broken (Emi prologue) [Updated 8/18]
Replies: 26
Views: 10818

Re: (Un)broken (Emi prologue)

Also, this paramedic says some stuff that we are trained NEVER EVER to say in the presence of patients. Such as...? This is a curiosity thing more than anything. Getting the med details wrong in the first few chapters isn't a big deal, I think, but given the premise, it's going to be important to f...
by griffon8
Thu Jul 19, 2012 8:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/17

As we collect our stuff and dry off, he leans over and grins at me. “Now, tomorrow will be the test,” he states, rather cryptically. “Test?” I ask, not understanding. “The commitment test. Emi explained it to me,” he replies, but I'm still not understanding. I furrow my brow and roll my hand, askin...
by griffon8
Wed Jul 18, 2012 1:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flight of the Clay Bird (or The one where Kenji goes fast)
Replies: 4
Views: 1839

Re: Flight of the Clay Bird (or The one where Kenji goes fas

Mirage_GSM wrote:Hmm, Kenji X Emi is one of te few pairings I can't remember having been done before here.
Let's see where you take it...
It has been done before. You even commented on it. :P

Okay, it was two years ago, but it stuck in my mind. Had to do a bit of searching for it though.
by griffon8
Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/16

Oddball wrote:
Mirage_GSM wrote:
However, “almost only counts in horse-shoes and hand-grenades.”
What?
You've never heard anybody use that saying before?
Actually, the original phrase uses 'close', not 'almost'.
by griffon8
Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:42 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: Typos found
Replies: 27
Views: 16818

Re: Typos found

Were it myself saying that, it would be, "Not really. It was just my having a little party...", but that's probably some British English dialectical thing :P Maybe so, because I'd be saying 'it was just me having a little party'. I really need to get back to this sometime and add the other errors.
by griffon8
Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:26 am
Forum: Support
Topic: Katawa Shoujo full flowchart
Replies: 243
Views: 563992

Re: Katawa Shoujo full flowchart

hmm... i seem to have a problem here... i followed everything, wanting to go to the slow recovery scene... so i had 2 shizune flags and the training flag.. but in the end... i died... is there any more specific things you must do to get to that scene? :< You have to 'go for it' when running with Em...
by griffon8
Sun Jul 15, 2012 9:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/15

I do have one question, though. What do you guys think of the little 'cold war' with Shizune? I like it. Unlike theartificial, I didn't see it as a battle for Hisao's affection, so much as Shizune ensuring that Aiko was doing her best to help the new guy. Shizune already knew Hisao wasn't going to ...
by griffon8
Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Memory Hisao has of Lilly
Replies: 72
Views: 24219

Re: A Memory Hisao has of Lilly

A theist believes in God - or some higher power. Correct, though this belief may include more than one god. An atheist believes in reason, intellect and worldly justice. Incorrect. By definition, an atheist does not believe in god or gods. He/she may use reason and intellect, and want worldly justi...