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Finally, a Kenji fic where Yuuko wasn't his girlfriend. I never liked that bit of fanon . Your grammar is good, the story flows well, and it accomplishes your objective of showing a transition from a Kenji of old to the Kenji we know. It's not great literature, but you show promise. Keep it up and y...

Some problems I though about with this story: 1. It's established in the VN that Lilly is the one who isn't a morning person. Granted, it's their first day in Scotland and jet lag will alter things, but it's never been mentioned that Hisao has problems with mornings. 2. Hisao has spoken to Mrs. Sato...

Oh yeah, about that DVD. It's really, really easy to make it impossible for a DVD to be read, so if he actually wanted to get rid of it, he could with no worry about anyone finding out what's on it. Keeping it is just asking for someone to find out what's on it. But then, probably 50–90% of your her...

you had to go and not only throw the unexpected at my face, blowing my mind but also make me laugh my ass off. I was expecting it. Still laughed my ass off. Glad you put the bit about Aiko forgetting to lock the door after her discovery. Nice attention to details. Now, when is Hisao going to get ar...

OtakuNinja wrote:As a LillyxHisao-shipper, I approve of this. Bravo!

Interesting that your avatar is from Shizune's route…

I thought 'empathy' as well, except Eprlide wrote 'apathy and/or empathy' which says at a minimum 'empathy and/or something else that isn't empathy' to me.

Eprlide wrote:most have numerous social problems which can include a lack of apathy

I'm sure you must mean something else, as I can't really see a 'lack of apathy' as a bad thing.

It will be here . Jeeze, what's with all the requesting lately? It's specifically against the rules here.

I disagree with Mr. Anonymous Guest. Normally I hate seeing those choices given in a story, but if all you're doing is your own extra scene to introduce Rika as if it was part of the VN, it's good.

That said, if you continue this, please don't put in choices. Just write your story your way.

I think the only problem I've had is the idea that Shizune would disallow a picnic on the grounds that it would be used to recruit new members for a club. It makes me think the Interfaith Club is being singled out for this treatment. If the club is violating school policy by using a picnic as a recr...

Chrono180 wrote:And yeah Mirage, they probably would. Though thats never realy explored in the comics.

This looks like a job for Dr. Blink, Superhero Shrink!

Very nice. Glad I haven't seen the original. Let's keep the quality high!

Meepergon117 wrote:^This!
I'd really like to know where this goes...I've always been interested in what happens to Iwanako, so I'd like to see this get finished up!

Um, in case you hadn't noticed, this has been dead for over two years. I don't think we're going to see any more.

Hey, no problem. Lesson learned, right? We try to be a pretty mellow bunch here. I find this forum pretty friendly compared to some of the horrors I've encountered. Anonymous posters are starting to get on my nerves though… The extra layer of anonymity seems to bring out the worst. Don't think they'...

Hisao is sitting in the chair next to the couch, ohh, what a comfy chair that--no, no, I must stay loyal to the couch. Although the chair would probably be easier to smuggle back to school, hmm. I laughed quite a bit more than I thought I would at this line. I just love your Suzu. It's in moments l...