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JukoVon wrote:Rin's Hisao is the worse, the good ending has them throwing away their future. I don't understand how the bad ending for Rin is her getting a scholarship and doing something with her life.

Because of the possibility that, like Sae's husband, Rin will eventually kill herself.

JukoVon wrote:I don't think it has anything to do with Lily because I got all the endings with all the girls and there is still the extra picture too

If you have 100% completion and all 11 endings, you should have the picture.

Absolutely correct, demonix.

The scene is called 'Slow Recovery'. In 'Lunch Evolution Theory', choose 'Wait for Shizune and Misha…'. In 'Waylay', choose 'Yes'. In 'Cold War', choose 'Don't drag me…'. Finally, in 'Exercise', choose 'Go for it'.

That was beautiful. I suspected Hisao would be there to make it a happy ending, but you did a great job conveying the mood.

Well that was quite a change in the story.

Oh, looks like I'm the first reader. That's because nobody is expecting an actual update here—the thread title wasn't updated. So I was very surprised to find an actual update here. Beyond happy to see a long-awaited update of course. The volleyball game worked well. Good that you didn't detail eve...

Hoitash wrote:“I think they know where here,” I quipped.

we're

Hoitash wrote:The armor, and what was left of the guy inside it, were annoyingly heavy.

was—armor is your subject, and that is singular

You are absolutely insane. And entertaining.

>her hand intertwining with Misha's as her booming laugh cracks through the air Pronoun usage. There's no way Shizune has a booming laugh And she doesn't. When you use a pronoun, it automatically refers back to the most recently used noun—in this case, Misha. But that does mean that the next senten...

At first I thought you were writing an alternate start to the Shizune route. Then I realized you were doing the scene from the Act 2 FMV. Part of my confusion was the mention of Hisao having lunch on the roof with Emi & Rin. I don't think that happens if you're on Shizune's path. But that's a minor ...

Besides, what fun is there to torture someone who has lost his mind? :twisted: Didn't Doomish write a whole story about that? :lol: 'Dusk Maiden of Amnesia' makes one of the most intriguing take on ghosts and the paranormal. It is currently my favorite take on the subject of ghosts and the unknown,...

I like this. Good to see the beginning of their relationship, even if it starts after graduation in the Hanako path. Couple things to correct: before flopping back down into bead and rolling bed At least, not yet, anyways . anyway—Always annoys me when I see plural adverbs. :x Humorously, a linguist...

The Coordinator spoke two words and two words only, in a voice that was somewhere between a hiss and a growl. “Bloody fools. They've messed it all up. Characters - you can't trust them.” So were the other words broadcast telepathically? :) Well I didn't see that coming. I didn't think about it bein...

I've missed your writing themocaw. Good to see you dip a toe in again.

Very evocative bit here. Is this based on some anime? Wikipedia shows no relevant hits from what I see.

For Griffon8: Start here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Three-legged_crow There seems to be some contention on whether the thing is a raven or a crow. I arbitrarily decided to make it a raven, because I read Bernd Heinrich's books about ravens. I think ravens fit the description slightly better. For...

I find this quite fascinating.

The use of the raven to connect things was interesting. I'll have to look up yatagarasu.

Looks like you're starting with a few vignettes to assemble into a greater whole. I look forward to the final product.