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You are still insane. It works well for you.

“I just don’t know what that’s like. It would be easier if everyone were just wrong. But you’ve seen all the things I’ve seen now, and they don’t… consume you the way they do me. It might not seem like much, but you don’t know how much I’ve changed ever since meeting you. I used to go days at a tim...

Hoitash wrote:the main MD series

Ha! When I first read that I couldn't help but think of the stories I'm editing. They're referred to all the time collectively as 'MD'. Never noticed that the abbreviation would be the same, probably because 'MD' has to be preceded by 'H&K:' in my mind for your story.

Well I took a chance on the new Misha Route. I'm hoping the normal reasons I have for not reading your writing (e.g., With Apologies…) don't pop up here. I'm glad I took the chance. I didn't read your last attempt, so I have no preconceived notions about it. It firmly establishes where the divergenc...

Noticing that this was a revision, I reread from the beginning. You've improved, though as Mirage said you need a proofreader. There are a couple times where it's confusing as to who's talking. Also, you don't need that note about using English; it's obvious from the context. Change of Perception He...

ProfAllister, have you been reading Cracked.com?

Oddball wrote:

Silentcook wrote:...Life's a beach, and then you die?


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GODDAMMIT, now you people have gotten me doing this as well.

One of us! One of us! Gooble-gobble, gooble-gobble!

Fixed.

Kyvos wrote:I wonder if this is the kind of stuff that writers actually talk about when naming characters.

Of course it is, even if it's just 'ordinary' names. Writers want to come up with an Awesome McCoolname, not stick them with an Unfortunate Name or have them choose a Fail O'Suckyname.

I could have taken this in a far darker direction but I think everyone deserves to have something happy written for them once in a while. Thank you for reading. And I greatly appreciate that. I'm glad I was able to read what you write, because as good a writer as you are, I just can't take your dar...

Hoitash wrote:EDIT: Theme Song of Awesome added to the First Post.

It wasn't until I got to the first line of the last stanza that I realized what song you were using.

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: You are absolutely insane. And entertaining.

Are the comments normally supposed to be as entertaining as the story?

Kyvos wrote:I really don't like Mollocke. I won't be able to read it without thinking "bollocks."

Totally agree that Mollocke can't be used, but I didn't think of that reason.

Well Justice is already taken, but I don't know his current status in this universe.

I've never been a fan of heroes taking a name that points to what their powers are. In a superhero game I played in, my character had Immunity to Fire. So what name did I pick? Icarus.

I think I've read phone sex scenes before. Obviously they did not have much impact on me. This one did. Well done.

I do enjoy all these little stories and how they fill in a whole post VN Hanako route world.

YourFavAnon wrote:The meal passives in a comfortable silence,

Pretty good when I only notice one error like this.