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Negativedarke wrote:Here's a link to the TVTropes page.

Heh, I did love the "My eyes are down here" bit.

Fixed that for you…

Warehouse 13 is yet another show that if I watched television, I'd watch it.

I can't comment about the ambulance situation in Japan, but I know that here in Detroit--a city in a modern state--the ambulance response times are obscene, if an ambulance shows up at all. There are news reports of people having to wait for up to (and possibly more than) half an hour for an ambula...

No, it was in the collection-only story in the latest printed book. Not on the web.

Are you a fan of Schlock Mercenary by any chance? Major fan. How did you guess? Because the latest printed book's backup story was the first reference I ever saw about Yellowstone's caldera. Seemed to fit. As for my last reply, I put what I did because, while concerned, I couldn't tell how serious ...

Thanatos02 wrote:I'll feel like a hypocrite for it, but Kenji's milk doesn't exactly have a huge impact on the story, so there shouldn't be any issues with a minor edit like that.

As long as it doesn't turn out to be a Chekhov's Gun.

lol @ my fic and how far off it is after playing the Shizune route. Too right. Just finished rereading this and that was the big thing that struck me with the Shizune/Misha conversation at the beginning of chapter 2. Started going through the old stories that I liked. I'm compiling a list of storie...

I'm going to tell you right now that I don't like choices in stories. It's a story, not a VN. But it's your story, not mine. I'll enjoy reading it anyway. I do hope you take Silentcook and Mirage's advice about using the girls as supporting characters and don't worry about 'flags'. I know you said p...

Are you a fan of Schlock Mercenary by any chance?

This was very good. Nice short chapter. Good interactions. Miya is mysterious—shocking, I'm sure. But there are hints of what led to that mysteriousness. Maybe we'll learn more. I'm certainly looking forward to any more of this you write.

Shenanigans is a wonderful word.

Chrono180 wrote:Sorry for the delay on this chapter. I was in the hosptial recovering from my suicide attempt.

I don't know. I started the editing I do because I loved the story. He had the first four chapters written out before I found them. But I knew he needed an editor. And I have been brutal. We even argued over some purple prose he was fond of. Nobody outside the beta readers will ever know what that s...

Wow, that is totally opposite of how I edit. I read it first for my own pleasure and then pick it apart.

It is possible to get 100% without getting all the endings with the girls. It isn't possible to get 100% without getting the Kenji ending. So I didn't include it.