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Mirage_GSM wrote:

Dream wrote:And the feeling of "anyone can die" certainly help to give a very tense tone to it.

I get that feeling from every story just by reading the name "Doomish" as the author...

QFFT!

This is why I don't read Doomish's stories until I know where it's going. So I haven't read this one.

There have been two eerily similar stories before where Hanako planned on confessing to Hisao, ending with seeing Lilly and Hisao out in the wheat field. There was another one where Hanako told her therapist about planning on confessing to Hisao, but we the reader knew from the birthday gift Hanako ...

I'm enjoying this. I've seen another post Rin neutral—oh hey, I just noticed you misspelled 'neutral' in your thread title :oops: —ending around here; yours is quite different. More the merrier as far as I'm concerned. "How did they taste?" she asks. "Excuse me?" "The brains. They're the only way zo...

Welcome, Dinky.

Given you made the first post here in four and a half months, I'm thinking this is as much as there is going to be here. First post pretty much says that. And if you look down at the bottom of the page, there is a 'Subscribe topic' button to the left.

To quote Mr.Krabs "MOAR" Okay, 1: Welcome to these forums. 2: Note that one of the threads up top is titled 'No requesting.' As the devs have no problem reminding people, this is a dictatorship. That said, I think we're a pretty friendly bunch. Just mind the rules. :) I just finished up to the last...

A nice start to writing. I look forward to anything else you produce.

Comrade wrote:the whole crane deal made me realize i could be a good factual proofreader

Being annoyed by similar mistakes is what made me try my hand at editing.

Hoitash wrote:Fun fact, it is not unusual for Michiganders who turn 19 to go to Canada to drink and gamble in nearby Windsor.

I thought that was just so they could visit their girlfriends.

Solid writing, good grammar, and an interesting idea. I look forward to more. Iwanako is married now, to a man I don't know, but I sent her my congratulations, which she accepted cordially. We've never discussed the letter she sent me after I left. To be honest, after all this time, I don't know wha...

Thanatos02 wrote:Hell, I think the only other time I've seen that is with Ammy in Okami, with her name being pronounced 'Ah-ma-tah-ras' rather than 'Ah-ma-tah-ra-soo.' The more you know, I suppose.

Asuka from Evangelion. It's pronounced 'As-ka'.

Apparently, it's pretty common with the letter u.

Well, not knowing the game I looked it up. I understood enough to enjoy the story.

It's easy to ignore the fact that the game didn't exist until two years after the events of KS.

I'll let you in on a little secret: I read the stories in the Fan Fiction forum in reverse order of my interest. I'm a patient guy, so I like to save the best for last. I did all the game's routes in reverse order of my affection for the girls. The point I'm getting to is that this little tale of yo...

Yeah…

I think I'll just stick to the fact that your first three uses of the word 'it's' should be 'its'.

I don't think I want to comment any further.

Well I'm not too tired to point out some errors. I'm far to busy with my mission to meet the Oracle to stay here until night falls.” With that, I turn on my heels and head back to the roadside, repacking my disheveled mess of clothing and other luggage. In comical fashion, Shiina comes rushing up to...

Well, Sev'risk'avina gets my vote for 'Best First Post'. But finish the game, huh? :lol: When I started playing, back in the dark, dark days when only Act 1 existed, I though Lilly and Hanako were going to be my favorites. After I played, Emi & Shizune became my favorites. That hasn't changed, but I...

Crazy.

[grammar lesson mode ON]

it's = it is

its = possessive

There are no exceptions.

[grammar lesson mode OFF]