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by griffon8
Fri Feb 22, 2013 3:45 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Missing a few scenes. (Rin Act 3 and Emi Act 4)
Replies: 5
Views: 5608

Re: Missing a few scenes. (Rin Act 3 and Emi Act 4)

One further note about Emi's route: to even get the choice of talking to Emi's mom, you had to talk to Mutou rather than say you're too busy.
by griffon8
Fri Feb 22, 2013 12:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown

You made a good choice. Nice that you worked Molly into it as well. I assume you're planning on pairing Iwanako with one of the five main girls —based on your single point of departure desire— but it's a good idea to be different with the side characters. This should in no way be taken as an indica...
by griffon8
Thu Feb 21, 2013 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: When Hisao was Rin
Replies: 29
Views: 13249

Re: When Hisao was Rin

That's not true... there have been a few good end continuations (not recently), typically involving meeting one or the other set of parents. Still that's not surprising. The neutral end is the one that feels most honest, harsh as that may be. I think I remember that one now. They went to Hisao's pa...
by griffon8
Thu Feb 21, 2013 10:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: When Hisao was Rin
Replies: 29
Views: 13249

Re: When Hisao was Rin

You know what's missing from this forum? A really good Rin continuation from her good end. Strange that there are a couple good ones from her neutral end, but none from the good. This was good. I had to laugh at many points. something hat's not to light and not to dark. that's; too; too bird dreams ...
by griffon8
Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fan-made sequel writing.
Replies: 12
Views: 4153

Re: Fan-made sequel writing.

I was interested in reading this mostly because I'm planning on writing my own version of an Emi continuation. We already have excellent continuations of Hanako , Lilly , and Shizune . There have been good stories taking place after Emi and Rin good ends, but nothing going multiple chapters and of r...
by griffon8
Wed Feb 20, 2013 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 37245

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/17)

The theory went out the window when Saki wasn't in the Shanghai. Miki's explanation that her weird behavior was due to stomach problems did away with the speculation about it being a setup. But until that explanation was given and proven true, it felt like she was setting up Hisao for an 'accidental...
by griffon8
Wed Feb 20, 2013 3:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) (u 2/14/2

He has stated that there will be a pairing and that it will be with a girl. He hasn't, IIRC, stated that it will be one of the main five girls, but that is my impression. I expect Iwanako's equivalent to 'Lunch Evolution Theory' will tell us a lot about what happens. After that scene in the VN, Hisa...
by griffon8
Wed Feb 20, 2013 1:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 44873

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Valentine's Day Update

You know we only do this because we love you. :twisted:
by griffon8
Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 44873

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Christmas Update

LegyPlegy wrote:
Hoitash wrote:“As you wish,” he said, and started playing Rise of the Valkeries.
I'm quite sure "Valkeries" should be "Valkyries", a quick youtube search making sure, haha.
While we're on the subject, it's 'Ride', not 'Rise'.
by griffon8
Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 37245

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/17)

No, Saki. That's whose route we're playing with. It doesn't matter that Miki doesn't like Saki, it's just the vibe I felt from how Miki acted on the way to the Shanghai.

And it was breakfast. :mrgreen:
by griffon8
Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 37245

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/17)

centurion911 wrote:I like what you tried to do with Miki's reactions on the way to the Shanghai, but it kinda made me think she was setting him up (like arranging a lunch with Saki and bringing him along) more than it conveyed her crush on him.
That was totally the vibe I got too.
by griffon8
Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 02/14/2013

Fantastic update, I haven't the slightest idea whether Reciprocate is the choice that leads to the bad or good end, so well done not telegraphing where the story was heading with this choice. Tradition is to lead with the bad choice, but I think there are other indications of this going to the bad ...
by griffon8
Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 37245

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/17)

I was referring to the following passage: A thought strikes me. “I guess I miss Saki because I miss being close to someone—having an intimacy with someone not even on a sexual level, but just as friends. Someone where you don’t even need words to express humor.” “I think when I was with Saki, I did...
by griffon8
Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lotus Child
Replies: 26
Views: 7715

Re: Lotus Child

Nice little surprise there.

The current generation always thinks the next one is the downfall of civilization. We're always wrong. :roll:
by griffon8
Tue Feb 19, 2013 5:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown

That being said, I suspect that if there's an underlying reason for a lack of attention to this story, it's that the concept is esoteric. While divergence, continuation and (in some cases) Peggy Sue fics are the only fics I like reading, and frankly, the only fics I feel that are worth writing, I d...