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by griffon8
Thu Mar 07, 2013 10:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 20050

Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/3/13)

it collides with me with what I image is the force of a run away freight train Statistically, Emi tackles 90% of all new students within two days of their arrival. ... Subverted for once^^° second:.... what? You used the word 'image' when you meant 'imagine'. And 'runaway' should be one word here. ...
by griffon8
Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 20050

Re: A Painful Past (OC) On hold until 3/9/13

Your poll allows people to choose all three options…
by griffon8
Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 37245

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 3/7)

You are getting better at this. I think this is your strongest chapter. “grande Americano au lait.” Now here's a drink that confuses me. A caffè Americano is espresso in hot water. Surely you don't mean an actual Americano, because that has alcohol in it . A café au lait is a mix of coffee and steam...
by griffon8
Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 20050

Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/3/13)

I tried, but I simply can't get into this. I keep mentally picturing Shizune's brother and the school's librarian whenever you refer to Hideaki and Yuuko by name and it throws me out of the story every time, Naomi as well, to a lesser extent. I agree. There's a reason stories don't use the same nam...
by griffon8
Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
Replies: 46
Views: 11053

Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3

I never liked her nick names in the VN because i never knew how to friggin pronounce them. I always assumed they were pronounced like "High-Chan" and "Shy-Chan". They're not. :) They're actually pronounced like "Hit-chan" and "Shit-chan." :lol: you have got to be friggin kidding me! I will never be...
by griffon8
Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332247

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 3/06/2

Ah, another lovely chapter. Thank you. Now for some editorial commentary. so [ it ] isn’t as though Misha Word needed there. If they looked [ like ] they were very Another word needed there. long (unfortunately) before I'd put it 'long—unfortunately—before'. Avoiding parentheses is better. That's an...
by griffon8
Wed Mar 06, 2013 5:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
Replies: 46
Views: 11053

Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows.

Click on the title of the post you want to link to. For your chapter two, this give you: http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=8235#p145376 Then you use this form for the link: [url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=8235#p145376]Chapter 2[/url] And the final result looks like: Chapter 2
by griffon8
Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fan-made sequel writing.
Replies: 12
Views: 4153

Re: Fan-made sequel writing.

Pretty sure that's the same city Rin's atelier and Emi's mom are located.
by griffon8
Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 3/5 Update

Image
Obviously, I'm still along for the ride. :mrgreen:
by griffon8
Tue Mar 05, 2013 10:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 162167

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 3/3]

First of all, let me say nooooooooo not the Yuuko/Kenji ship. That is my least favorite non-canonical pairing as well. There is no good basis for it other than each of them vaguely fits what little is given about the other's ex. To me, it only makes sense if the characters we see pictures of in the...
by griffon8
Tue Mar 05, 2013 8:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 04/02)
Replies: 57
Views: 16034

Re: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 03/01)

Mirage_GSM wrote:Maybe this one?
I remember that one, but I didn't think the pairing had been made explicit. Strangely, the title never before led me to believe Lilly would be the target. :oops:
by griffon8
Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597585

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/2]

One question, do you intend to split this at some point into a good/bad end or no? There is going to be a split into a neutral end near the end of this act. I'm still debating the possibility of a bad end, seeing as how anything I can think of is just a matter of forced drama, and I'd like to emplo...
by griffon8
Mon Mar 04, 2013 10:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 04/02)
Replies: 57
Views: 16034

Re: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 03/01)

Congrats, you bear witness to my first post. I like your character, as well the concept. I've seen another OCXLilly, but I don't think it's been updated in a while. I'm honored. I believe you're referring to Kitsune Spirit's Sun Blind . I believe Kitsune plans on continuing, and hope he does. And t...
by griffon8
Mon Mar 04, 2013 12:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako) (Update 3-15-13- CH 2)
Replies: 15
Views: 6295

Re: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako)

Oh, now, pandaphil. You can't make these so easy to comment on.
pandaphil wrote:Well to be fair, spellcheckers are useful for picking out obvious typos and spelling mistakes and fixing them yourself. But yes, nothing beats a strong grasp of spelling and grammer if you're going to try writing.
:oops:
by griffon8
Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako) (Update 3-15-13- CH 2)
Replies: 15
Views: 6295

Re: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako)

The only thing I have to add to the previous two posts is that there is no tipping in Japan; the taxi driver would have insisted on returning change.