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Yeah, sorry I wasn't faster on getting the edits done. If you could at the very least change all the instances of 'alright' to 'all right', I'd appreciate it.

Most of my free time has managed to disappear somewhere…

Oh, I read most of Doomish's stuff before it was removed. But after "With Apologies…", I took my cue from the reaction of others before deciding whether or not to read it.

Well, to quote "In Ruin" by Doomish: "No. No no no. You don't--" Lilly shuffles the phone even closer until her voice is clear as crystal. "You don't understand. When I tell Hisao I love him, I haven't meant it for months. I have had sex with SEVEN other men, more often than not at my sister's disc...

I was looking through the list of stories and noticed that one of mine is in the wrong place. Then I realized that 'The Decision' was where 'Questions With And Without Answers' should be, and the latter is missing. Also, I love the suggestion of renaming the thread 'The Yamaku Library - a fan fictio...

bhtooefr wrote:(assuming that the picnic included Kenji's reveal of his one time with Yuuko)

Please remember that Yuuko being Kenji's ex is not canon. It is probably my least favorite bit of fanon.

Oddball wrote:

Mirage_GSM wrote:

“Summers?” Time Warp chimes in.

But... But... He still has two eyes...

Oh good. I was hoping somebody would get that without me having to explain it.

I got it too, so no worries.

I will admit that when I see a new story by a new author, I try to read the reactions of others before I invest my time. You have pleased Mirage, so that definitely tells me to read it! I always find stories taking place after the Kenji end to be a little depressing, but you are making this interest...

You have formatting tags in the original file? I have to add all that stuff in when I go to post my new chapters. It usually takes an hour or more just to get them all in place, and I still usually miss an italics call, or a paragraph break here and there... Yes. It makes it much simpler. When I ed...

… it might be more accurate to list my word counts as (some number)-ish. That's why I rounded the count for my longer stories to the nearest hundred. While I have a word count from the original file, I discovered that eliminating the formatting tags dropped the word count by two for each instance. ...

Hanako Nakai wrote:Deleted, sorry about bothering anyone with my useless writing.

Wow.

I hope you write some more. As Helbereth and Mirage pointed out, your story certainly had potential.

Please take Numb's advice.

[1]> I’ll let her take the lead, considering that she rarely does that; and maybe her self-esteem might grow better. [2]> I should take the lead tonight. I need to make this night perfect for Hanako. Well, this is disappointing. You're not writing a VN, you know. We don't need choices. You can get ...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Here:

He gets up and walks over to the window, leaning his arms on the sill.

Huh. Totally missed that.

Definitely one of my favorite stories on the board right now. Seems most post-bad end stories force Hisao and the girl back together in really contrived ways. Glad you're not doing that. Continuity error here: I'm not even sure if Hisao hears me, as he simply stands there, head bowed and unmoving. A...

I've also seen a few where Hanako's mother was still alive and had remarried. I think Hanako even had a half sister in one of them. It wasn't until the full release that we knew Hanako was an orphan. Only her father being dead was mentioned in any official material. I actually have read a story whe...

Thank you for the praise. I was worried about posting anything where there may be "trolls," but the whole KS community (what's left of it, as I came into it about a year or two late) really seems supportive of each other. I think it's an "I understand your feelz" sort of brotherhood. Trolls tend to...