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by PsychicSpy
Tue Dec 17, 2019 2:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 3233

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (12/1/19 Update)

Thank you to MoashLannister for the prompt. His prompt: Birthday Orgy for Hisao. As the name implies, this story is very graphic so don't read if that bothers you. Otherwise, enjoy! BIRTHDAY SURPRISE “Surprise!” a chorus of voices shouted. Emi’s hands left their place in front of Hisao’s eyes. He bl...
by PsychicSpy
Wed Dec 11, 2019 4:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DackFayded Story Archive, AKA "I Swear I Write More Than Just Smut" - Updated 12/31/2019
Replies: 18
Views: 2316

Re: DackFayded Story Archive, AKA "I Swear I Write More Than Just Smut" - Updated 12/11/2019

Cute and kinky. Greatly enjoyed! “Hopefully I can finish this chapter soon. My publisher’s been hounding me, telling me people are hungry for more of ‘The Adventures of Captain Katawa’. Glad to see a little "cameo" for Captain Katawa. I actually had enjoyed Downix's route for her and so I'm glad to ...
by PsychicSpy
Tue Dec 10, 2019 1:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 3233

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (12/1/19 Update)

"Misha or me" You right my bad. Some of the grammar rules I forgot. It wasn't my biggest fuck up but thankfully another author caught it early As for the characterization, I will admit I didn't know how to proceed without kind of making it a challenge, because Hisao isn't the type of guy to seduce ...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Dec 02, 2019 3:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2019/12/02]
Replies: 33
Views: 5168

Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2019/12/02]

Very cute! Love it.
by PsychicSpy
Sun Dec 01, 2019 8:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 3233

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/18/19 Update)

This is a story I decided to post to welcome the holiday season! I had written it a few weeks ago based on a prompt that MoashLannister had suggested. I hope y'all will enjoy it! (Note: This is NOT my S10 submission. This is a different, unrelated piece.) UNDER THE MISTLETOE Hisao sighed. The studen...
by PsychicSpy
Sun Nov 24, 2019 3:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 234493

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)

I've really liked this route. It was the first I really read through and I think that you do Misha justice in excellent characterization, and the right balance of emotions that makes it feel like this is a true, lost Misha route that just didn't make it in the game. Fantastic writing, and I'm excite...
by PsychicSpy
Sun Nov 24, 2019 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DackFayded Story Archive, AKA "I Swear I Write More Than Just Smut" - Updated 12/31/2019
Replies: 18
Views: 2316

Re: DackFayded Story Archive, AKA "I Swear I Write More Than Just Smut" - Updated 11/19/2019

I like your smut. So much so that I've been pacing myself through the stories. I also appreciate the fact that you do post it, because it does give me confidence to write and post smut. It's much appreciated, and I'm to see what you do next.
by PsychicSpy
Sun Nov 24, 2019 3:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 1/2/2020)
Replies: 46
Views: 4985

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 11/20/2019)

Since I finished my religion paper, I’ve been meaning to read and review this. I’m going to try and give both positive and constructive thoughts. I’ll try to include some solutions with anything I feel can be fixed. First, positives: I feel that this story has been executed nicely. I don’t think it’...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Nov 18, 2019 12:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 3233

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/13/19 Update)

Thank you both for your feedback. Always appreciated. Personally, I felt that the first few scenes were necessary for exposition, though I agree that they could have been left out. To me, the scenes make more sense in, and allow a reader to settle into the story. This is my new story which is most c...
by PsychicSpy
Fri Nov 15, 2019 5:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (4/26/20--Contest Fic "A Lighter Touch")
Replies: 73
Views: 13654

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 11/13/19)

Hisao started to say something stupid and Shizune clapped her hand over his mouth just in time. The little lovers were so entwined that they hadn’t noticed a thing. Shizune preferred to keep it that way, in no way shape or form did she want to deal with this. She carefully closed the door and stepp...
by PsychicSpy
Wed Nov 13, 2019 12:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 3233

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/13/19 Update)

Thank you guys for the awesome feedback. This forum has great people on it, and all your comments are always appreciated. This fiction is a more comedic piece featuring Emi, Rin, and Hisao. Takes place post-Emi good ending. Thank you so much to StilesLong and KCK for proofreading! Enjoy and feel fr...
by PsychicSpy
Sat Nov 09, 2019 11:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Saturday in the Garden with Emi
Replies: 5
Views: 633

Re: Saturday in the Garden with Emi

I love the story. Really good take on the prompt. Very heartwarming!
by PsychicSpy
Sat Nov 09, 2019 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 3233

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

Thank you so much for the kind words. I chose to use the flashback because I thought the story would fit better if Hanako was already upset. This story was already aimed to be a little more tragic, but replaying parts of Shizune's route, I found that the idea had no canon basis. Maybe that's why I f...
by PsychicSpy
Fri Nov 08, 2019 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 3233

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

You've got a good premise going. The unusual friendship of a Misha-Hanako relationship is a compelling dynamic to explore. However, the piece seems to be too short to use the flashback effectively. It could improved, pacing-wise, if it were removed. Best wishes and, again, welcome. Thank you for th...
by PsychicSpy
Fri Nov 08, 2019 12:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (4/26/20--Contest Fic "A Lighter Touch")
Replies: 73
Views: 13654

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 10/26/19)

The story was a good one, and was a very interesting take on the prompt. I wasn't sure how you were going to pull off the Mutou/Shizune aspect of the prompt but it was done really well.

In regards to your Evil Lilly stories, I hope to see more installments in that series in the future!