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by psyxypher
Tue Jul 03, 2018 11:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 50
Views: 6268

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

Alright, made those edits. Thanks again, you're now credited as a proofreader (even if it was after the fact). You're part of the team. For better or for worse.
by psyxypher
Tue Jul 03, 2018 10:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 50
Views: 6268

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

I'll give it a more thorough proofreading if you want. I have a soft spot for your premise >.> Blah, apparently my proof readers didn't catch these. To be fair, they weren't focusing on the grammar as much as the actual content of the writing itself. Also, I could use more proofreaders! Especially ...
by psyxypher
Tue Jul 03, 2018 10:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 50
Views: 6268

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

ayyyyy it's another one! I fully endorse more fics that are more about the girls and less about Hisao x whoever. You don't have much yet but it seems good so far. I'll be interested in seeing what they bond over and how they keep contact. You also have some lingering stylistic issues, most notably,...
by psyxypher
Tue Jul 03, 2018 8:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 50
Views: 6268

Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

After seeing a flurry of fanart depicting Rin and Hanako together on the Reddit, I felt inspired to write this fic. The premise is that Hanako meets Rin whilst the latter is eating in the Tea Room. I plan to make this an entire route and hopefully maintain a constant update schedule (the idea is eve...