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by sloth4
Mon Apr 23, 2018 1:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: From Shizune's Perspective
Replies: 109
Views: 41010

Re: From Shizune's Perspective

This was a good read. I'm not sure why, but making Shizune a bigger bitch has somehow made her a more likable character in my book.
by sloth4
Wed Apr 18, 2018 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 16045

Re: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer

I like how you've expanded on Mutou like this. Not sure anyone ever has, at least in the stories I've read. Very well done, sir.
by sloth4
Sun Apr 15, 2018 11:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 60629

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

This was really good. The only other fic where I've seen ANY of the girls being a vicious bitch was "Class of 2017" by FluffandCrunch (Saki was a bitch in that fic too). I like the concept you were going for with the endings, something more real-world than the happily ever after these things usually...
by sloth4
Thu Apr 12, 2018 9:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)
Replies: 102
Views: 154396

Re: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)

I really enjoyed this. Miki and Suzu make such a cute couple.
by sloth4
Thu Apr 12, 2018 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 205
Views: 67890

Re: Shower Scenes

I laughed so damn hard the first time I read this. The sheer awkwardness of the situation, and the constant reminders to stop pointing. Top notch stuff.
by sloth4
Mon Apr 09, 2018 3:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 112
Views: 14144

Re: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route

I think you're doing an excellent job of making her father an unlikable bastard. Is there a plan to have him evolve as a character, perhaps after he finds out about his daughter's true health? He's a little two-dimensional, acting as an overbearing father/husband who might do what he does due to lov...
by sloth4
Sun Apr 08, 2018 3:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 16534

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

"Good...morning." I hesitantly greet. "Eh, something like that. How are you today Hisao?" He answers back with a dull look in his eyes and a half-hearted grin. "I'm doing fine. Apparently, better than you're doing." I chuckle back at him. I hate to kick a man when he's down, but after all of the jo...
by sloth4
Sat Apr 07, 2018 10:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Revenge and Ice Cream (A Misha & Rin One Shot)
Replies: 11
Views: 3070

Re: Revenge and Ice Cream (A Misha & Rin One Shot)

I agree with the others, super cute story.
by sloth4
Sat Apr 07, 2018 7:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 112
Views: 14144

Re: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route

This is very well written, and I love the new angle with Rika's personality. Since everyone goes off the idea of her being a risk-taking nihilist. It's nice to see her vulnerability and the way Hisao has adapted to her. Keep it up. It's good.
by sloth4
Fri Apr 06, 2018 6:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
Replies: 35
Views: 7305

Re: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route

I like this new version of Rika. She's so vulnerable and confused. Well done.
by sloth4
Fri Mar 30, 2018 12:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 352824

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

I remember reading this and getting to Chapter 20 and saying: "This is a good time to bring things to a close, probably close to the end of the story... wait, what?" That's when I saw the chapter count that went up to 60. It was daunting, but well worth the read. This is exactly the sort of story Ha...
by sloth4
Fri Mar 23, 2018 9:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou
Replies: 18
Views: 8260

Re: Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou

That was really sweet.
by sloth4
Fri Mar 23, 2018 8:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Replies: 38
Views: 16467

Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

The Akira pseudo-route is my favorite, to the point where reading this made me genuinely sad. It was well-written and enjoyable, but that twist ending is gut-wrenching.
by sloth4
Wed Mar 21, 2018 9:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 53875

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 5th, 2017)

This was really well written and I'm glad I found it. I like the Bad Ending as well, it didn't depress me like a lot of them tend to do, but I like how it's A) Hisao breaking up and B) fixable, in that the relationship could be repaired (unlikely, but possible). That makes it fairly unique from what...
by sloth4
Tue Mar 20, 2018 7:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 4980

Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)

This was a fun little read. Miki has good characterization and it's nice to see some interesting male OCs. Keep it up.